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Stretched to Breaking Point

2005-04-28T11:10:30-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 83, Reviews: 4, Complete

Its abit mysterious, perhaps pretentious. i jst had a lot of ideas going at once. basically its about stress, work ,self harm, not being able to live your life

MASCARA

2005-03-29T10:01:18-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 79, Reviews: 12, Complete

i was at a party and just found this girl really sad, theres more to life than this but she doesnt know it. i need help on the last stanza

Story

2005-03-29T09:58:06-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 294, Reviews: 3, Complete

I may not leave this up here. i cant tell if its worth absolutely nothing or whether its good. i need people to review and tell me if they relate etc. please?

Fish in the Sea

2005-03-28T09:43:15-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 43, Reviews: 3, Complete

dont worry, theres plenty more fish in the sea. so...where are they?

For Anthony

2005-02-23T12:32:01-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 91, Reviews: 3, Complete

for someone i used to know about 10 years ago, i have no idea where he is now

Black Bound Body

2005-02-23T12:29:34-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 56, Reviews: 2, Complete

weird. about motorbiking. might not leave it up here,depends

Is it wrong to shoot the man that's just been shot

2005-02-16T11:32:19-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Horror
Chapters: 1, Words: 39, Reviews: 3, Complete

I was thinking about JFK. Is it right to photograph (shoot) a tragedy unfold? hope it isnt TOO confusing

Tsunami Dream

2005-02-16T11:18:48-08:00

Author: me10
Nature
English, Rated: K
Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 36, Reviews: 5, Complete

i had a dream that i was involved with the tsunami a while ago. im REALLY not sure about this poem, i think it needs help. tell me how?

And when i take my clothes off

2005-02-13T11:02:32-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
Fantasy/Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 60, Reviews: 4, Complete

lol, im worried about the title! anyhow you can see this in different ways so i wont explain too much. not based on fact really. arty.

Just another Object

2005-01-29T11:47:03-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General/Parody
Chapters: 1, Words: 81, Reviews: 4, Complete

it evolved as i was writing it. i know its not exactly well written but id appreciate knowing what you think of it

But shouldn't

2005-01-29T07:58:42-08:00

Author: me10
Friendship
English, Rated: K
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 80, Reviews: 2, Complete

just an idea i had, if you think its a love poem read on, i wouldnt exactly call it that. review and make me happy (u dnt hav 2 say nice things?

Waves of emotion

2004-12-30T04:31:46-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 53, Reviews: 9, Complete

I wrote this late last night about the Tsunami, my reaction after seeing it on TV but it can also relates to everyday sort of stuff, i know its not excellent,just simple

You replaced everything

2004-12-29T07:47:25-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 73, Reviews: 6, Complete

Just about change, to me recently by someone else

Visit me

2004-12-28T09:35:29-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 235, Reviews: 7, Complete

Sort of a dream. im keeping the rating as G bcos there is nothing sexual about this poem, however read what you like into it. not sure about putting this up, might remove it...R+R?

Dance of Life

2004-06-03T12:50:38-08:00

Author: me10
Fantasy
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 83, Reviews: 8, Complete

sorry about the messy format, the title explains most of it, similar to one of my other poems. R+R>?

Cherry Lips

2004-04-18T12:27:04-08:00

Author: me10
Fantasy
English, Rated: K
General/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 191, Reviews: 8, Complete

cheesy title, weird poem, but see what you think

Sure

2004-04-08T13:15:05-08:00

Author: me10
Friendship
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 141, Reviews: 4, Complete

I know its badly written, but ive written it and uploaded it to vent. something ive needed to write for a long time! about a person im starting to hate.

Give me a number, brand me a name

2004-02-22T06:52:36-08:00

Author: me10
War
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 111, Reviews: 7, Complete

Poem about the holocaust sort of, im wondering if it can be seen like a victim of bullying, but im not sure. hope this doesnt offend anyone.

6 months

2004-02-22T06:35:19-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 171, Reviews: 2, Complete

Last year (exactly today) i had to travel on an aeroplane. im scared of them, so it was really hard for me, i really thought i would die. im not sure about the last 2 stanzas, but tell me what you think please.

Drowning the Fresh

2004-02-14T11:03:29-08:00

Author: me10
Nature
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 67, Reviews: 6, Complete

This poem is unusual for me, i havent written anything for ages, and this is completely different. try not to be too harsh if you decide to review. its about depression. (see what you think)

No Longer My World

2003-12-29T09:13:15-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 153, Reviews: 6, Complete

just a poem about growing up. Please Read and Review.

Tiger Stripes

2003-12-03T03:24:57-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 94, Reviews: 7, Complete

Different from my other stuff, freeverse. This poem is strange, and in my head i know what it means but it might be difficult for readers. Please read and review.

Fish Slice

2003-11-17T09:44:02-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 148, Reviews: 5, Complete

TRUE STORY. about...click above and find out

Klimt

2003-11-17T09:42:32-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 114, Reviews: 5, Complete

? god knows what i was thinking, ive got klimt on the brain, help me please. its about a painter ok?

The truth about FP

2003-11-02T11:16:04-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Humor
Chapters: 1, Words: 100, Reviews: 21, Complete

Please don't attempt to offend my work. i dont mean to offend anybody. please read and review and if you arent sure what it is about how about looking at the title?

Writer's Wall

2003-11-02T10:49:38-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 2, Words: 177, Reviews: 15, Complete

Writer's block- and yes i still am infected with writer's block so this poem is...well...hmmm...R+R to find out? CHAPTER 2 NOW OUT

Be Hit and Hold On

2003-10-30T12:39:58-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 82, Reviews: 7, Complete

something that isnt about suicide. R+R and tell me if its pathetic

Murdering the Monster

2003-10-30T12:37:32-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K+
Supernatural
Chapters: 1, Words: 287, Reviews: 5, Complete

Strange, it's about killing something that has made you want to kill yourself. rated for knives! please R+R

title here

2003-10-30T12:34:31-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 74, Reviews: 5, Complete

i dont think its worth a title, please read and review and leave a title you think is suitable, i know i cant find one :( its about confusion and tiredness..so kinda how i feel everyday.

Writer desperately seeking title for poem

2003-10-25T09:39:25-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 2, Words: 197, Reviews: 13, Complete

Not sure what this is about, there may be a chapter 2 if i work out how to do it! R+R, please and suggest a title.

Sweet White Icing

2003-10-19T10:52:36-08:00

Author: me10
Fantasy
English, Rated: K
Romance/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 213, Reviews: 10, Complete

A thought I had when I went ice skating last night, please R+R and leave an idea for a title because this one is probably temporary unless anyone thinks its ok?

This is why

2003-10-15T12:08:12-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 169, Reviews: 5, Complete

I don't feel the same way about you. I read JJR Meerraf's poem called 'why' and decided to try and answer it. Please no flames, but please do read and review.

Dry Lives

2003-10-10T09:17:19-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 124, Reviews: 6, Complete

(WARNING: still plagued with wriers block-but trying to write thru it) about the day i had today. R+R yar?

Pigments

2003-10-09T11:10:21-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 37, Reviews: 9, Complete

Pure nonsense, im serious, i still have writers block and i CANT WRITE! :( R+R please dont be too harsh!

Into a Door

2003-10-07T12:16:40-08:00

Author: me10
Family
English, Rated: T
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 88, Reviews: 4, Complete

Dedicated to everyone who is or has been physically abused. Your life is worth more. This isn;t a true story to me, and it isnt meant to be offensive or anything. I would still like you to read and review please.

Damn perfect

2003-10-05T10:57:09-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 122, Reviews: 7, Complete

i know the last bit isn't great...it's about my Dad, and how he wants me perfect.

Glorious Nectar

2003-10-04T13:24:16-08:00

Author: me10
Friendship
English, Rated: K+
General/Horror
Chapters: 1, Words: 94, Reviews: 10, Complete

A little odd. R+R if you would! About revenge.

Granted

2003-09-30T11:22:00-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
Romance/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 138, Reviews: 5, Complete

about someone who finally talks to you after a long long time of waiting. R+R?

Life from death

2003-09-29T12:11:17-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Supernatural
Chapters: 1, Words: 73, Reviews: 8, Complete

i saw this tomb in a graveyard and couldnt help but notice that a plant was growing out from it. i just thought it was weird so i wrote a weird poem about it! R+R?

Memories don't have to stay

2003-09-28T03:46:13-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 97, Reviews: 3, Complete

this isnt my best, i will be working on this so dont be too harsh!

Never limited

2003-09-28T03:26:58-08:00

Author: me10
Haiku
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 12, Reviews: 4, Complete

...

Lit string

2003-09-28T03:22:58-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 213, Reviews: 3, Complete

just a bad day.

Hide me, Protect me

2003-09-26T11:41:20-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 90, Reviews: 3, Complete

Sometimes you need to be protected from your friends, they can sometimes be the only ones who hurt you

love

2003-09-26T11:34:04-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
Angst/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 104, Reviews: 4, Complete

ok, so the game is love, anyone want to play! R+R please.

Spice

2003-09-25T11:04:14-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 96, Reviews: 7, Complete

i just let the words roll from my fingertips so this doesnt make much sense unless you are me! R+R please. i suppose this is based on someone..

i want a title for my poem

2003-09-25T10:46:40-08:00

Author: me10
Friendship
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 116, Reviews: 4, Complete

sorry i havent got a title- want to help? please R+R. its about 'friends'

The cold

2003-09-25T08:37:51-08:00

Author: me10
Nature
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 98, Reviews: 5, Complete

winter

Seeker of Attention

2003-09-23T07:29:03-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 93, Reviews: 3, Complete

i'm an attention seeker. R+R please?

suicide, yeah i lied

2003-09-22T10:47:37-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 117, Reviews: 6, Complete

um..about a boy who wont let me tell him how i sometimes feel suicidal, i guess he doesnt like it. R+R

Needs a title

2003-09-22T10:12:37-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 34, Reviews: 3, Complete

self harm. just a simple poem, not my best. R+R please and if u like suggest a title?

On my own

2003-09-21T09:20:32-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 96, Reviews: 3, Complete

um...kinda complicated...made it up on spur of the moment. please R+R and if u have any ideas of what i can write a poem about i would appreciate it, i have a terrible case of writer's block :(

Wish

2003-09-21T02:32:35-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 32, Reviews: 2, Complete

um..im just trying out different kinds of writing poetry etc. this one is..about love. not great. R&R please!

I like Blackness

2003-09-19T11:25:33-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General/Supernatural
Chapters: 1, Words: 90, Reviews: 3, Complete

um..one of my first poems i ever wrote, thinking about updating it soon, any help would be appreciated so please R&R. about..yeah title explains.

Fake

2003-09-19T07:16:25-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 29, Reviews: 4, Complete

um...yeah i have writers block and im desperate to write something so i came up with this while i was in class today and thinking abut plastic surgery. does it make things better?

Forget the reject

2003-09-18T10:34:17-08:00

Author: me10
Haiku
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 51, Reviews: 2, Complete

boring haiku i wrote about what you need/what you dont need. please R+R. i really have a bad case of writer's block!

Teeth grind

2003-09-17T11:18:04-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K+
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 154, Reviews: 4, Complete

rating due to self harm stuff. please read and review. sometimes the way i feel just in my head.

home SWEET home

2003-09-16T12:59:39-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 245, Reviews: 4, Complete

about how i moved house then unfortunately went back to my old house and saw they were pulling it apart. one of my longer poems. please R+R

Stone

2003-09-16T12:38:45-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 123, Reviews: 4, Complete

yeah...pretty crap. R+R tho . I WILL BE WORKING ON THIS

Raising the heart rate

2003-09-16T10:22:54-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 93, Reviews: 2, Complete

its a bit pathetic this poem, but it was just the way i was feeling one day. R+R?

White

2003-09-15T11:40:07-08:00

Author: me10
Nature
English, Rated: K
General/Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 15, Reviews: 4, Complete

something abit odd. R+R. sort of haiku because its so small.

Decisions, decisions

2003-09-15T11:34:01-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 81, Reviews: 6, Complete

yeah...self harm, please R+R, teen angst i suppose.

Mr Regret's train trail

2003-09-15T09:01:42-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 187, Reviews: 4, Complete

about how sometimes you cant help regretting things you have done, its like taking a train which you can't get off, atleast i think it is! please read and review.

Disgrace

2003-09-14T11:14:25-08:00

Author: me10
Friendship
English, Rated: K+
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 97, Reviews: 4, Complete

about a boy i know, i wont give him the satisfaction, i will never give in. dont you either.

Simply flames

2003-09-14T09:39:32-08:00

Author: me10
Fantasy
English, Rated: K
Fantasy
Chapters: 1, Words: 53, Reviews: 5, Complete

what can i say? what was i thkning? just a taste of evil. r'n'r but dont b too harsh, i know its not great.

Love, or too much of it?

2003-09-13T10:40:00-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 114, Reviews: 1, Complete

R'n'R to tell me how crap it is! i can't do a summary 4 it.

Out

2003-09-13T10:28:43-08:00

Author: me10
Haiku
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 11, Reviews: 4, Complete

very short poem, kinda useless, about being pushed away from people you know

Don't mask yourself in lies

2003-09-13T01:07:03-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 129, Reviews: 3, Complete

about a girl who shatters her mask

Unknowing enemy

2003-09-13T01:03:26-08:00

Author: me10
Friendship
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 106, Reviews: 1, Complete

this happened to me yesterday, the poem isnt good, but i felt i needed to just write.

Oh, my dear friend Brian

2003-09-12T08:28:38-08:00

Author: me10
Fantasy
English, Rated: K
General/Humor
Chapters: 1, Words: 142, Reviews: 2, Complete

ok! um...this poem is just trying to be funny...i know im not funny. its about my brain..or..brian.

Two grey

2003-09-12T07:53:20-08:00

Author: me10
War
English, Rated: K+
Tragedy/Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 187, Reviews: 1, Complete

I do not mean to upset anyone by this poem. it's about the twin towers. i was thinking about it all last night, i know it should have been posted yesterday. please donnt b too harsh if u review, im just having trouble writing at the mo

Going, Going, Gone

2003-09-10T11:33:51-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 159, Reviews: 2, Complete

about school. when you have nearly finished at a school, and u look back at it all. wondering where its gone! (just incase: Year 7- means the first year of secondary school)

Putting People Low

2003-09-10T09:48:51-08:00

Author: me10
Friendship
English, Rated: K
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 93, Reviews: 2, Complete

sort of bullying, but not a severe type.

needs titleagain

2003-09-10T09:47:00-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 129, Reviews: 1, Complete

This isn't about me- im just trying new ideas out for poems. hope u like. R+R please.

still needs a title

2003-09-10T09:38:59-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 162, Reviews: 4, Complete

hmmmm anyone to advise me on my title? greatly appreciated! i think its about paranoia. and feeling guilty

A few stumbled words

2003-09-09T08:20:15-08:00

Author: me10
Fantasy
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 132, Reviews: 4, Complete

Not sure what this is about either. CONFUSION.

No title yet

2003-09-09T08:07:20-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
Romance/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 118, Reviews: 3, Complete

please, i really need to get a title, can anyone help me? R+R its all in my imagination

She smiles softly

2003-09-09T07:25:18-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Drama
Chapters: 1, Words: 115, Reviews: 3, Complete

it's about a mask, everyone wears one!

Something Strange

2003-09-08T11:24:29-08:00

Author: me10
Fantasy
English, Rated: K
General/Fantasy
Chapters: 1, Words: 88, Reviews: 1, Complete

just a little something that doesnt make much sense

A small trance

2003-09-08T11:17:59-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 106, Reviews: 4, Complete

just an idea about cutting (rated for self harm)

Phone

2003-09-07T08:58:17-08:00

Author: me10
Love
English, Rated: K
Humor/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 118, Reviews: 4, Complete

A bittersweet, short poem about a boy who just would not pick up his PHONE and call me!

Easter Evening

2003-09-07T08:51:26-08:00

Author: me10
Family
English, Rated: K
Drama/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 91, Reviews: 3, Complete

Something that unfortunately happened on easter evening, it is exagerrated.

True Hate

2003-09-05T10:12:20-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 123, Reviews: 2, Complete

This is a feeling that comes and goes for me, see if you agree?

Suicidal rhyme

2003-09-05T09:51:01-08:00

Author: me10
Life
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 90, Reviews: 4, Complete

If you have the time can u R+R? its just a SIMPLE suicide poem. not sure if i need to rate it!

Real Pain

2003-01-13T07:20:44-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 58, Reviews: 3, Complete

When you feel like physical pain doesn't even exist. NEEDS UPDATING YEAH

See me be me

2003-01-12T11:14:49-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K+
Angst/Fantasy
Chapters: 1, Words: 74, Reviews: 2, Complete

Just what i would like for one day. NEEDS UPDATING I KNOW

Every School

2003-01-09T07:35:32-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 115, Reviews: 1, Complete

bullies, teachers, all the same aren't they. BADLY WRITTEN

Stop and Drop

2003-01-06T12:33:57-08:00

Author: me10
General
English, Rated: K
General/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 114, Reviews: 3, Complete

When people decide they dont want you anymore plz plz R+R. OLD VERSION, badly written i know,.