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Duality

2013-05-16T08:34:09-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: T
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Chapters: 1, Words: 242, Reviews: 0, Complete

Poetry. I would really appreciate reviews, interpretations, criticism, thoughts, opinions, or any kind of feedback. Pretty please.

Private Voyeur

2013-04-17T13:14:59-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 243, Reviews: 0, Complete

Please review. It's an "I" poem, which I generally don't like and I kind of think it's crappy all on its own. I'd love to get some serious, critical feedback.

Bad Poet

2013-01-18T11:48:56-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 109, Reviews: 2, Complete

Opinions would be awesome. Thanks for reading.

Unhappy Mollusk

2012-10-12T14:47:18-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 237, Reviews: 0, Complete

I re-uploaded it because there was an error.

Blind

2012-10-12T14:45:12-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 260, Reviews: 1, Complete

I wrote it because I like someone. Reviews and criticism are pleaded for.

Corners Cutting

2012-10-08T09:53:58-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 58, Reviews: 0, Complete

Short and to the point. And it's not formatted how I want. Waah.

Sir, Please Focus

2011-10-20T15:08:09-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 68, Reviews: 0, Complete

A short, blurry, not-very-good poem that I scribbled out. Your thoughts are welcome and appreciated.

traversion

2011-10-13T09:29:08-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 325, Reviews: 2, Complete

Poetry. Constructive criticism and interpretations are encouraged and greatly, greatly appreciated because I don't think this is very good.

So You Can Hit Yourself

2011-06-22T22:33:25-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 107, Reviews: 2, Complete

While struggling to overcome writer's block, I concocted this half-decent little poem.

The Capital Woman

2011-04-24T22:30:41-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 3,009, Reviews: 0, Complete

A short story I wrote for class. It's basically an extended metaphor. Any constructive criticism is appreciated, but please be gentle; I fancy myself a poet, not a fiction writer. Rated for language.

Image of a Man

2011-04-24T22:20:37-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 226, Reviews: 1, Complete

A poem I wrote for class. My professor said that the speaker isn't clear and I'm concerned that the overall message gets lost. Constructive criticism on these things would be appreciated.

Comfort Wasted

2011-04-02T23:04:11-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 65, Reviews: 1, Complete

I must break this habit of posting so late. This is a brief poem I wrote for class. What grade do you think it deserves?

Where was Miss Cleo?

2011-03-12T00:23:43-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 474, Reviews: 1, Complete

As usual, I have no confidence about my poetry. This poem is pretty different for me stylistically. Consider it a dramatic monologue. I am begging you for feedback.

Norm

2011-02-11T21:44:44-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 42, Reviews: 0, Complete

Such a bummer.

Fever 104

2010-11-15T21:16:29-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 260, Reviews: 2, Complete

A poem inspired by Fever 103 by Sylvia Plath. Any constructive review is appreciated because I have no idea if this is any good.

Still

2010-09-07T01:35:11-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 131, Reviews: 1, Complete

Take from it what you will. Nobody wants to read poetry this late.

Grow Up Kid

2010-07-23T20:15:25-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 143, Reviews: 1, In-Progress

Eh. Read it if you don't have anything better to do.

It Came from a Monkey

2010-01-27T18:06:10-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 307, Reviews: 1, Complete

A timeline of the death of hope.

Monster Mouth

2009-12-26T20:20:18-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 99, Reviews: 0, Complete

You Oughta Know. Kind of a mediocre poem written out of anger.

To the Victor Goes

2009-10-02T02:29:21-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 192, Reviews: 0, Complete

Just read it.

Aliens Should Invade

2009-08-10T16:51:47-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 44, Reviews: 1, Complete

Hippie bullshit.

Fantasy Energy

2009-08-07T21:39:55-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 165, Reviews: 1, Complete

I dunno. It's not great. And it's too late right now, no one will read it. lol.

Parking Brake Lovers

2009-06-06T11:41:25-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 145, Reviews: 1, Complete

Missed messages.

Monopoly

2009-04-30T21:52:53-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 212, Reviews: 0, Complete

Eh. I dunno.

The Future Is

2009-04-28T11:05:55-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 176, Reviews: 1, Complete

Let me know what you think.

Please Save Me

2009-03-30T21:37:17-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 167, Reviews: 1, Complete

Kind of a piece of crap.

Reprobate

2009-02-03T16:30:23-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 94, Reviews: 0, Complete

I actually don't think this poem is all that awful. lol.

If You Really Looked at the Stars

2009-01-31T21:49:44-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 178, Reviews: 0, Complete

A fairly mediocre poem. It's more of a splurge of emotion than anything and that's not something I do often so, you can be certain the next poem I post will be very political. lol.

I Wrote this at the Office

2009-01-28T17:01:25-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 154, Reviews: 0, Complete

Like the poem I posted yesterday, this one is not great. But, it's not toally suckish. Check it.

Trading Sloppy Blowjobs

2009-01-27T19:54:15-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 202, Reviews: 4, Complete

A poem I wrote the other day. It's no work of art but, I suppose it doesn't suck. lol. Lemme know what you think.

Who's Killing Us?

2009-01-04T13:15:40-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 357, Reviews: 1, Complete

This poem is little rambly. It's not the best that I've ever written. But, here it is. lol.

Why We Should be Socialist

2008-11-17T10:01:57-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 234, Reviews: 0, Complete

I wrote this in, what I consider to be, an interesting format. Check it out.

The Last Love Song

2008-11-03T13:46:37-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 266, Reviews: 0, Complete

Nothing matters anymore.

Youth

2008-10-15T20:18:34-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 229, Reviews: 1, Complete

The world.

These Laws of Physics

2008-09-30T15:20:03-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 320, Reviews: 0, Complete

If we were stars.

Hurricane Force

2008-09-17T16:37:44-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 165, Reviews: 5, Complete

This poem is unlike any other I've ever written. It's a little more raw and in-your-face. I crave feedback on it. So, read and review. Please.

All we need is Love

2008-09-13T18:02:01-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 191, Reviews: 1, Complete

And this is how we go about making it.

Oblivious

2008-09-08T16:27:36-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 38, Reviews: 1, Complete

A short poem I wrote just before my Social Problems class. Tell me what you think.

Criticism

2008-08-26T11:38:50-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 119, Reviews: 1, Complete

Take what the critics say.

The One Way Out

2008-08-26T11:37:51-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 171, Reviews: 2, Complete

A different kind of poem than I've written before. Take what you will from it. Reviews are always appreciated.

The Big Sleep

2008-07-03T11:58:32-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 148, Reviews: 1, Complete

Sleep is our most significant waste of time. Kind of some fun with my screenname in this poem.

Tortoise

2008-06-29T17:14:57-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 113, Reviews: 1, Complete

So what?

God is Not Dead Yet

2008-05-11T15:23:35-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 247, Reviews: 3, Complete

Orignally, this poem was a response to something I had heard Rush Limbaugh make. The poem is not about him at all. lol. Read it and tell me what you think of it. What it makes you think about. etc.

All It Takes

2008-05-11T15:19:27-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 122, Reviews: 0, Complete

If there were heroes left.

Jejune

2008-04-16T16:04:16-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 85, Reviews: 2, Complete

I wrote this poem while intoxicated. Please go easy on it.

Nullified

2008-04-01T16:52:20-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 126, Reviews: 1, Complete

I write for you.

The Sociopath

2008-03-16T17:13:12-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 111, Reviews: 1, Complete

Negative thinking.

Shadow

2008-02-29T08:59:58-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
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English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 50, Reviews: 1, Complete

Where the light breaks.

The Apple of My Eyes

2008-02-15T11:42:05-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Love
English, Rated: K
Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 38, Reviews: 1, Complete

A rather fruity love poem. :

The First Verse

2008-01-30T15:12:45-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 217, Reviews: 1, Complete

Where has God gone?

Give In

2007-12-04T19:16:16-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 81, Reviews: 3, Complete

Please read it. Please tell me what you think about it. Please tell me what you think it's about.

Abort! Abort!

2007-10-03T09:15:09-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 139, Reviews: 3, Complete

Ah...I'm not sure what to say. Just read it, please?

Amen

2007-08-30T08:43:41-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 135, Reviews: 2, Complete

So be it.

Remorse

2007-08-23T22:42:31-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 75, Reviews: 2, Complete

The sun exploded.

Wrinkling

2007-06-12T23:54:55-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 86, Reviews: 1, Complete

A sonnet that I wrote by request of a friend quite a while ago. I'm just posting it since my writer's block has yet to lift. I wrote it on a whim but, I think it came out pretty good. Let me know what you think.

Squint

2007-05-19T18:41:30-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 105, Reviews: 2, Complete

Driving. Please review, it would mean a lot to me.

Retrospect

2007-05-16T13:54:38-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General/Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 26, Reviews: 3, Complete

I'm honestly nervous about posting a poem that is SO short but, it's four lines and a haiku is only three so, I guess it counts. lol. It's kind of political but, it's short so, give it a read? And reviews are always great.

Gravity

2007-04-24T17:59:41-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 104, Reviews: 2, Complete

Kind of a romance poem. Little bit spur of the moment so, the structure is...nonexistant. lol. But, I think it's kind of neat so, read and maybe tell what me what you think? :

Dirt and Water

2007-04-05T08:33:51-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 171, Reviews: 2, Complete

Thinking and overthinking. Once more, as is character of my personality, I post this with little confidence. lol. I'm not certain that even I have interpretted each nuance in the poem. Please read it and give me some feedback. I would much appreciate it

Hazard Inc Destruction Company

2007-04-04T19:26:02-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 131, Reviews: 3, Complete

Um, it's...alright. lol. I never have any confidence after I've finished writing. But, it's alright. lol. Please read it. Kind of an emotional poem, nothing with any real meaning.

The Aryan

2007-03-29T08:23:59-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
War
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 31, Reviews: 2, Complete

Kind of a short piece that I'm not very proud of. I just scrawled it out of boredom in school. It's extremely short, only six lines, so, I'd appreciate some feedback. :] Kind of an antiwar thing.

Cancer Cure

2007-03-20T11:45:57-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 182, Reviews: 2, Complete

Ah...it's a bit iffy. Just read it, please? Lots of anger in this poem. Any opinion would be appreciated.

With You

2007-03-02T13:10:25-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Love
English, Rated: K
Angst/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 298, Reviews: 3, Complete

I'm craving some real feedback for this one. I'm not sure how well it's written. Any kind of review would be appreciated. I really want to know if the poem can be understood.

The Folly

2007-02-23T21:04:35-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 94, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

It's short. It's mediocre. I wrote it spur of the moment so, don't expect much but, please read it and tell me what you think. :]

Zirconium

2007-02-13T21:07:03-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: T
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 182, Reviews: 2, Complete

I owe the correct spelling of the title of this poem to no.peace.los.angeles: A very fine writer whose work you should check out.

None of That

2007-01-27T17:25:40-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 200, Reviews: 4, Complete

When the breathing keeps you awake.

Fungus Clouds

2007-01-23T21:58:48-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
War
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 107, Reviews: 1, Complete

To our warriors. Antiwar poem. Read and interperet.

Speak Not of Missing Breath

2007-01-08T11:46:51-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
Spanish, Rated: K+
Angst/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 104, Reviews: 2, Complete

Poetry. He doesn't admit to his sadness because, to him, there's nothing wrong.

Putrefy

2006-12-19T08:58:09-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 118, Reviews: 1, Complete

Adding injury to injury. Reviews would be awesome.

Context Clues

2006-12-08T13:53:24-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Love
English, Rated: K+
Romance/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 148, Reviews: 1, Complete

I think it's reasonably good but, it contains personal facts and my own experiences that make it less than appealing to the casual reader. But, perhaps you could lemme know what you think anyways?

In the AM

2006-11-19T10:31:18-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 190, Reviews: 4, In-Progress

A poem that I am extremely proud of. I'd tell you what it's about but, literature is meant to be interpretted and I'd like to hear what someone else thinks of it. ANY kind of review would be greatly appreciated as long as it isn't mean or something. lol.

IRE

2006-08-22T11:56:49-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: T
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 427, Reviews: 1, Complete

He lost himself in the rage that he fed. Not a lot of planning went into this, it just kind of happened. Reviews would be super cool.

hahahaFuck You

2006-07-20T12:03:37-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: T
Angst/Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 286, Reviews: 3, Complete

He was imperfect.

Dead Man's Chest

2006-07-05T13:34:38-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
Angst/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 304, Reviews: 1, Complete

A fun interpretation of the title of the new Pirates of the Caribbean. When you lose love that you can't forget, you live inside his chest.

The Prophecy of the Dying Sky

2006-05-23T16:09:22-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
Angst/Romance
Chapters: 2, Words: 496, Reviews: 2, Complete

The Sky is falling. Kind of a series I'm doing. They don't have much to do with one another except for the sky concept. Please R+R

Nothing Exists

2006-05-01T16:06:04-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 357, Reviews: 1, Complete

I know it's out there somewhere

The Baby Disease

2005-11-22T14:07:43-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Life
English, Rated: T
Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 183, Reviews: 11, Complete

Anti-abortion. Rather harsh. Please R+R.

No One's There

2005-10-22T19:21:35-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Life
English, Rated: K+
Angst/Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 157, Reviews: 2, Complete

That dial tone just won't go away. No matter what I do, No One's There. Please Read and Review.

But

2005-09-10T15:37:47-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
General
English, Rated: T
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 112, Reviews: 3, Complete

I'm not sure where this poem came from but, here it is. Please read and review.

Emancipation Obliteration

2005-06-29T19:04:27-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Love
English, Rated: T
Romance/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 445, Reviews: 3, Complete

Love. Everytone understands this. Everyone but the one person that really matters.

The Second Face of Love

2005-04-05T18:24:35-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Politics
English, Rated: T
General/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 239, Reviews: 6, Complete

You'd never think it was about America

Child Fucker

2005-03-18T12:19:09-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Politics
English, Rated: T
Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 246, Reviews: 8, Complete

Political poetry, you can tell I really love my country. Please read a review, I always appreciate it.

Inside The Copy

2004-09-20T13:22:44-08:00

Author: theCoffeeEnzyme
Religion
English, Rated: K+
Angst/Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 153, Reviews: 4, Complete

This turned out to be a religous poem even though that's not how it started. I'm a little concerned that you guys will understand what I'm trying to say in this so, if you get it, tell me in a review so I'll know the message got across.