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Measuring Goodbye

2007-03-23T15:11:51-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: K+
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 147, Reviews: 0, Complete

I don't understand goodbye

Ballots

2007-03-23T15:10:32-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: K+
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 97, Reviews: 0, Complete

I keep messing everything up :

The Blade

2007-03-23T15:09:31-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: M
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 57, Reviews: 0, Complete

Pain makes you think some crazy crazy things....

October 13th 2004

2007-03-16T10:53:09-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Family
English, Rated: T
Poetry/Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 178, Reviews: 1, Complete

It was a Lively Writing assignment, we had to write a memory poem and I wrote about when my brother died

My Future?

2007-03-16T10:48:39-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: K
Poetry/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 24, Reviews: 0, Complete

At least I know my answer now...

A Toast

2007-02-21T00:17:29-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: K+
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 341, Reviews: 2, Complete

I think it's better that you read it and draw your own conclusion

Loves Sacrifice

2007-01-15T18:39:24-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: K
Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 152, Reviews: 1, Complete

...Long distance relationship with a workaholic. Need I say more? Is the title proper?

My Everything

2006-11-05T17:11:51-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: K+
Romance/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 253, Reviews: 2, Complete

Dedicated to a boy who if he saw this he would know who he was. The boy who is my everything even if we fight. Please R&R it's new and unrevisied so feel free to give your honest thoughts....

Act1

2006-10-29T22:20:41-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 228, Reviews: 2, Complete

Life's sad realities there is a mistake plots is supposed to be plot but I haven't figured out the new format on here yet so I can't fix it sorry, help would be awsome

To Have You Love Me

2006-06-24T18:42:36-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: K+
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 65, Reviews: 1, Complete

...what would you give for love?

What Do You Do When Forevers Gone?

2006-06-24T17:13:22-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: T
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 103, Reviews: 1, Complete

What can you do when you lose it all?

Crying Myself to Sleep

2006-06-24T17:02:45-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: K+
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 57, Reviews: 1, Complete

It may be better to of loved and lost than never to of loved at all but losing love hurts more than words can even being to explain

Friends?

2006-06-24T16:59:37-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Friendship
English, Rated: K+
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 100, Reviews: 4, Complete

Sometimes it seems like I don't have any friends and that I have nobody to blame but myself (please R&R)

You

2006-06-24T16:45:41-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Friendship
English, Rated: K
Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 182, Reviews: 0, Complete

Every once in a while there comes a time when theres a very fine line between friendship and something more it's old but still true even years later, not the best but not bad R&R plz

The Last Time

2005-11-13T08:32:57-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: K+
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 306, Reviews: 1, Complete

Some would call it tragic, i'll leave that up to you. Warning it is a bit rought around the edges so constructive critisim (preferably anyway) welcomed and much apreciated.

Q&A?

2005-11-02T17:32:05-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: K+
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 261, Reviews: 3, Complete

Does anyone have answers? Does someone feel the same?

Coma

2005-10-25T12:59:04-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 123, Reviews: 1, Complete

about a person in a coma and is listening to people make decsions about his/her life

Want

2005-10-24T13:30:09-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Love
English, Rated: M
Poetry/Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 143, Reviews: 2, Complete

Mind the rating please, those who can read it constructive critisism would be greatly apreciated, anything you feel would help. I had a rough time writing this one.

My Diary

2005-10-24T13:05:07-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
General
English, Rated: T
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 118, Reviews: 2, Complete

(rated high for a lack of understanding not anything bad or swears) Writing serves a my diary and i decided to write about it, constructive critisim please

Life is Measured

2005-08-24T20:08:55-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 49, Reviews: 2, Complete

It's a tad different from my other poetry, but it has a nice theme. Please R&R.

Let It End

2005-08-07T08:49:20-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
General
English, Rated: T
General/Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 265, Reviews: 2, Complete

have you ever just wanted to give up completely? Had someones words just drive you over the edge? well this is along those lines.

Goodbye

2005-08-05T12:02:48-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
General
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 133, Reviews: 2, Complete

Forgetting who I am, I'm no good at summaries so please just R&R. I'd apreciate any feedback.

A Settled Score

2005-06-02T13:43:35-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
General
English, Rated: T
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 47, Reviews: 6, Complete

Read and Review to tell me what you think and what could be better, as for a summery i don't know what to say

All Gone

2005-06-01T15:46:22-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
General
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 81, Reviews: 4, Complete

My English teacher gave the class a poetry assignment in which she took everyones name and put it in a cup and everyone had to put a place or a feeling into another cup and she drew names and topics...my topic was about the mall. I don't like the mall so

So Much

2005-05-23T19:39:18-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: K+
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 91, Reviews: 4, Complete

A darker veiw on life... I struggled a little with this poem and I'd really appreciate some reviews on it with ideas on possible adjustments just things to work on. Thanks.

Where is the Sanity?

2005-03-28T19:22:05-08:00

Author: Thementalmeow
Life
English, Rated: T
Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 112, Reviews: 6, Complete

just a poem on my outlook on life