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Always the Same as It Never Is 2

2009-05-27T07:47:47-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 969, Reviews: 0, In-Progress

Just visualize as you read, I hope it takes you to another place, I'm still working on this one so constructive comments are more than welcome!

My favorite part about Me and You

2009-05-26T07:54:35-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 119, Reviews: 1, Complete

backwards

Little people hopping around

2008-11-17T00:10:58-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 191, Reviews: 1, In-Progress

an artist statement for a photo assignment

Some People Say

2008-10-22T21:09:42-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Friendship
Chapters: 1, Words: 68, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

What I would like to know is if this poem makes sense to you and if you get anything out of it or if it is just easily bypassed. Thanks!

Plastic Spoons

2008-06-29T09:28:07-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 8, Reviews: 0, In-Progress

I was in art class makiing a list of things i needed and this is just what popped into my head. The format doesn't work for me on here so that makes a big difference but let me know what you think reguardless. Thanks!

he went creating music

2008-04-15T19:47:12-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 21, Reviews: 1, In-Progress

says it all. mostly about life. I actually wrote this poem under a restrait but I'm not saying what it is unless you are specifically intersnted

Just Friends?

2008-02-24T12:53:33-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 292, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

I wrote this a long long time ago. hmmmm I might revise it... but what do you think?

I just hope you realize

2008-02-04T08:26:46-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 32, Reviews: 4, In-Progress

aaah life.

What I had

2008-01-21T19:51:27-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
Poetry/General
Chapters: 2, Words: 29, Reviews: 1, In-Progress

short. just popped into my head. two versions of the last line let me know which one you like better.

Surprise Inside

2008-01-07T20:35:37-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 11, Reviews: 3, Complete

I wrote this for my college writing class. it was under the theme of identity. My teacher thought it was brilliant, I thought she was crazy. What do you think?

Change The World and Paint it Our Way

2008-01-03T07:43:58-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 64, Reviews: 5, Complete

A Story I Do Not Know

2008-01-03T07:41:52-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 113, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

well. the poem speaks for itself. again the formatting is in now way the way i want it to be and that makes a biiiiig difference but let me know what you think anyways : thanks!

I Went Back to Being Myself Today

2007-11-12T18:34:46-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 132, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

When writing this poem I tried to base it of off the poet Shel Silversteins style. Let me know what you think

Always the same As it never is

2007-10-30T08:56:59-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 966, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

You're life is always changing, you're always moving forward, we can look back, but not go back. It's never the same, it's always changing

Short but Sweet

2007-07-03T21:58:12-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 4, Words: 51, Reviews: 1, In-Progress

Sometimes i think of cool little three liners but i don't really put them into poems too often so here is my collection specifically for them!

Words

2007-07-03T21:46:05-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 110, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

I hate not knowing, but i like that i didn't know.

Won't You Tell Me?

2007-06-27T08:47:10-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 205, Reviews: 2, Complete

Even if you think i don't want to know.

That Girl

2007-06-08T22:09:03-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 235, Reviews: 7, In-Progress

You know how you write poems about other people. well i thought if someone wrote a deep insightfull poem about me it might be something like this, so i stepped out of myself and wrote as if from someone else... it's important to me that i get feedback!Thn

Sameness Genius

2007-06-06T09:42:01-08:00

Author: Lisa98
General
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 151, Reviews: 4, Complete

I wrote this for my college writing class... but i like it so i thought i'd share. what do You think?

Let's Not Say Anymore

2007-05-17T14:14:16-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 19, Reviews: 3, Complete

What do you say we just don't say anymore...

Take me with you

2007-04-18T23:21:43-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 2, Words: 30, Reviews: 6, In-Progress

true story, however, i never told him because i didn't think he would. CHAPTER 2: perhaps i will elaborate eventually, but these two have to do with eachother and don't at the same time. same boy, same situation, different phasesmoods in life.

I dont have a title yet! read me!

2007-04-09T08:53:01-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 124, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

Okay. so i wrote this poem and it is definately not done, and i don't know how i feel about it, but i felt like putting it out there and i hope to get lots of feedback so that i can revise it. so please read and let me know what you think!

Sometimes That's the Point

2007-04-06T23:15:09-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 258, Reviews: 4, In-Progress

...who knows what i'm getting at... but here it is

A Nice Realization

2007-04-06T23:13:06-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 42, Reviews: 4, In-Progress

just breath, that's all there is to it.

Oh it Hurts Holding Back

2007-03-26T22:31:38-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 158, Reviews: 3, Complete

I just can't get over this boy. I'll always wish that it had ended differently. Please let me know what you think

No Title Yet

2007-03-23T09:52:25-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 61, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

True story but i still dont know quite what i want. i know that the first two lines are kind of done before but keep reading past that, and let me know if you think they work anyways or not. Enjoy !

So Real and So True

2007-03-17T21:19:29-08:00

Author: Lisa98
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 26, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

Just a beginning thought, shall i go along with it or is it too much the same as the others and not worth... ?

A purple house with a yellow mailbox

2007-03-17T07:22:32-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 89, Reviews: 2, Complete

hmmm mm m...

Light Me Up

2007-03-16T09:13:53-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 46, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

just so.

But oh

2007-03-15T10:26:05-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 31, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

bittersweet

This Time

2007-03-15T10:24:42-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 12, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

you probably won't like this one. it might or might not be done.

Intense Boots

2007-03-02T13:51:14-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 15, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

Do we not like this one? yay or nay?

True and Free and Easy I Suppose

2007-03-02T07:30:54-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 44, Reviews: 3, Complete

Why do you make it so complicated, really its soooo simple. Challenge yourself. Note: ignore first line, that is title, not part of the poem.

Smear it So Splendidly

2007-03-01T08:18:40-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 18, Reviews: 5, In-Progress

It's a good thing.

Used to Be

2007-02-27T21:32:18-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Friendship
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 61, Reviews: 1, Complete

yes i know the title is lame, and the poem is certainly not phenomenal but... it is me and you can be your own judge of that

Okay

2007-02-25T10:58:28-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 74, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

this is basically my last relationship. it's not formatted the way i want it to be though so it's not as effective. if you can tell me how to format it let me know please ! Thank you

so you say

2007-02-25T10:28:47-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 14, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

you know, i just Don't believe you.

A Thousand Cartwheels

2007-02-21T10:02:40-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 63, Reviews: 1, In-Progress

has a bit do do with friendship...and boys put together and torn apart

So Shy

2007-02-19T17:18:55-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 50, Reviews: 4, In-Progress

If I was not so shy, this is what i'd do... Just the way I am, you either love it or you leave it, there is nothing I can do about it but hope that you see through it.

Today Today

2007-02-19T13:14:47-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 85, Reviews: 2, Complete

As much as I love this poem, others don't seem to enjoy it as much as I do but hopefully I will find someone out there who gets it and if you don't get it... let me know why, maybe i am just crazy

Way So Lame

2007-02-15T14:40:01-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General/Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 224, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

you write the first draft with your heart. thats what this is. A very confused state i'm in

Matters

2007-01-31T01:07:07-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 46, Reviews: 2, In-Progress

I wrote this a long time ago, but it applies to my life now recently. I want to know what you think of it, if it needs to change, what you'd like to see and such. and also what you think it may pertain to and how you can realate to it.

Simple as Orange Juice

2007-01-21T21:57:52-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Love
English, Rated: K
Poetry/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 126, Reviews: 5, Complete

This was a tricky one to write, but i'm pretty sure it's complete. I guess you could say it was about love, if that is what you want to call it, perhaps more about feelings in general on life and love :

Certainly

2007-01-21T21:36:28-08:00

Author: Lisa98
Life
English, Rated: K
Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 32, Reviews: 3, Complete

This is a poem i jotted down during class. I had a lot on my mind and this is just what came to me.