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Rapunzel: Retold in a Feminist Way

2012-06-03T15:18:09-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Fable
English, Rated: K+
Fantasy/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 2,018, Reviews: 6, Complete

I rewrote Rapunzel making her a strong female character. Reviews will be returned.

Winter Night

2011-02-21T13:07:34-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Nature
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 35, Reviews: 7, Complete

A short poem about snow. It needs improvement, all reviews returned

Angels

2011-02-16T16:36:04-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Romance
English, Rated: T
Hurt/Comfort/Friendship
Chapters: 1, Words: 1,640, Reviews: 8, Complete

A suicidal teen meets a boy who saves and changes her life. Written for my creative writing class, reviews will be returned

Always in My Heart

2010-10-11T06:31:52-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Spiritual
French, Rated: K
Hurt/Comfort
Chapters: 1, Words: 99, Reviews: 2, Complete

To my dog Jed. I am not looking for constructive critism on my writing style in this piece. I just wrote this out of love.

A Child's Prayer

2010-06-15T15:43:30-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 171, Reviews: 8, Complete

Another Children's poem. It's a prayer a child would say.

Monsters

2010-06-15T09:05:45-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
General
English, Rated: K
Supernatural
Chapters: 1, Words: 150, Reviews: 13, Complete

A children's poem about the monsters. Told from the viewpoint of a child.

Twister

2010-06-14T11:57:48-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Nature
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 114, Reviews: 6, Complete

A remake of my old poem Tornado. I deleted Tornado, it wasn't very good. I wrote this for English class. Please Review!

Bookworm

2010-06-13T19:56:23-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Friendship
English, Rated: K
Friendship
Chapters: 1, Words: 181, Reviews: 9, Complete

About a neighbor who only likes to read. I modeled this poem after Robert Louis Stevenson's poem, "The Gardner."

Man in the Shadows

2010-01-26T14:01:02-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Mystery
English, Rated: T
Adventure/Mystery
Chapters: 1, Words: 408, Reviews: 4, In-Progress

Eleven year old Ana finds a body in the woods. Never completely recovering from this horriffic event 16 years later she begins having nightmares about that day. Except in these dreams she sees something, something that could lead to the killer...

Brutus Sonnet

2010-01-23T12:26:18-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
War
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 134, Reviews: 2, Complete

I wrote this for English class. I had to write a sonnet about one of the characters in Shakespear's play, "Caesar." I chose to write about the tragic hero Brutus.

Blessed Be

2009-08-24T07:45:23-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 27, Reviews: 4, Complete

This is a short poem about God who loves us and will always care for us. So we shall eternally praise his name.

Faith

2009-08-11T19:39:13-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Essay
English, Rated: K+
General/Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 167, Reviews: 2, Complete

This is a short essay about faith in general. Sorry if it's boring, I'm new at writing essays.

I'm Not Bluffing

2009-07-09T05:30:24-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Romance
English, Rated: T
Suspense
Chapters: 1, Words: 239, Reviews: 7, Complete

Remake The divorce papers were not final. Jack, the love of Claire's life promised that if she ever left him, he would kill her. Two years had gone by and Jack had yet to find her. Claire felt safe until that stormy night, when Jack stood in her house.

My Savior

2009-05-02T14:01:45-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 64, Reviews: 6, Complete

A poem about who God is to me.

Eternal Love

2009-02-25T08:57:04-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 37, Reviews: 6, Complete

Never fear when God is near!

Jealousy Monster

2009-02-02T15:43:42-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: T
Horror
Chapters: 1, Words: 89, Reviews: 7, Complete

I changed my mind again, and made a new poem for my English project since my teacher changed the due date. I like this one A LOT better. I based it off another one of my poems.

Gracie

2009-02-02T14:43:03-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
General
English, Rated: K+
Friendship
Chapters: 1, Words: 2,722, Reviews: 4, Complete

A story of a boy and his pet racoon. I got the idea from stories my dad told me about a pet racoon he once had. The story takes place in a small town a long time ago. I don't have a year set, so let's just say before there was electricity. Please Review!

Roller Coaster

2009-01-29T17:13:04-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 99, Reviews: 5, Complete

This is my completed poem for English class. I deleted my orignal copy.

Miracles

2009-01-24T05:14:17-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 149, Reviews: 7, Complete

A short poem about the miracles Jesus has performed. At the end I give an add on lesson I guess you could say.

Twists and Turns

2009-01-22T13:23:23-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 40, Reviews: 4, Complete

Inspired by watching the news.

A Kiss

2009-01-20T16:49:06-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Haiku
English, Rated: T
Romance
Chapters: 1, Words: 12, Reviews: 5, Complete

A love/romance haiku. Very different from most of my writings.

Spread The Word

2009-01-14T03:41:06-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Haiku
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 30, Reviews: 5, Complete

A spiritual Haiku about writing and spreading the word of Jesus.

Fallen Away

2009-01-13T18:18:23-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: T
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 55, Reviews: 3, In-Progress

Jesus changes lives and he can change yours if you just let him in.

Love From Above

2009-01-12T12:06:36-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Love
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 47, Reviews: 2, Complete

Another 4 line piece.

By My Side

2009-01-10T16:35:32-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Spiritual
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual/Adventure
Chapters: 2, Words: 624, Reviews: 5, In-Progress

This is about a team who stands for God and goes through many adventures for him.

Prodical Son

2009-01-09T13:12:13-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 32, Reviews: 2, Complete

Do you know the story of the Prodical Son? If you do, it is one of my favorite stories. This poem is about his thoughts when he decides to come home. I am not really sure about this piece, so please review!

Remember

2009-01-02T14:34:19-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
General
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 16, Reviews: 5, Complete

A short, 4 line poem about remembering. I explain at the end. Happy New Year and God Bless!

Christmas Time

2008-12-22T18:48:55-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 49, Reviews: 4, Complete

A short poem about what Christmas is really about.

In God's Image

2008-12-02T15:51:06-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 47, Reviews: 7, Complete

I'm not quite sure about the title.

Thanksgiving Prayer

2008-11-27T04:49:53-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Spiritual
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 110, Reviews: 4, In-Progress

Happy Thanksgivng! This year my job is to say the prayer and this is what I came up with. I would really love a review before I say the prayer, but anytime later is fine too. God Bless!

Liar

2008-11-15T08:56:41-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: T
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 110, Reviews: 4, Complete

A problem many people have.

Salvation

2008-10-28T15:49:23-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort
Chapters: 1, Words: 14, Reviews: 6, Complete

This is a very short, 4 line poem. It is kind of thanking Jesus I guess you could say.

My Dream

2008-10-16T13:13:37-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Spiritual
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual/Adventure
Chapters: 1, Words: 834, Reviews: 2, Complete

This was an amazing dream I recently had. It is very deep.

Weak Stem

2008-10-03T15:22:07-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 86, Reviews: 2, Complete

I wrote this a while ago. I don't know if I like the flow too much. It compares a flower with a weak stem to how we look at others. I'm open to suggestions!

Break Free

2008-09-29T14:27:38-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Haiku
English, Rated: T
Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 13, Reviews: 4, Complete

Just about the truth, this is kind of spiritual.

With Joy Comes Pain

2008-09-25T18:21:24-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 35, Reviews: 5, Complete

A short piece, but very true.

Hidden Fantasy

2008-09-23T12:59:51-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Fantasy
English, Rated: K+
Mystery
Chapters: 1, Words: 128, Reviews: 6, Complete

A little poem I thought up. Very different from most of my writings. I don't think it is very good, but I worked hard on it so please read and review! I love constructive critisism!

Wisp of Wind

2008-09-18T13:29:21-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K+
Tragedy/General
Chapters: 2, Words: 223, Reviews: 3, Complete

This is my first time telling a story in the form of poetry, so bear with me. It will be about 4 parts. This actually happened to me less than a week ago.

Paper

2008-09-05T13:49:25-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
General
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 59, Reviews: 9, Complete

Extremely random! You have been warned...

Sleep

2008-09-04T18:18:13-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Haiku
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 43, Reviews: 3, Complete

A result of when I am tired. I explain in the authors note.

Champion Dreams

2008-09-04T03:35:31-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K+
Tragedy/Friendship
Chapters: 1, Words: 116, Reviews: 3, Complete

This is dedicated to my horse. She is only 4 years old.

Slap in the Face

2008-09-02T16:45:01-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Kids
English, Rated: K+
Family/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 773, Reviews: 3, Complete

A one-shot.

Freshman

2008-08-26T15:20:28-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
School
English, Rated: K+
General/Humor
Chapters: 1, Words: 78, Reviews: 10, Complete

Not my best writing by far, but a little story about my first day of school.

All Because of Me

2008-08-21T18:26:59-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Love
English, Rated: T
Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort
Chapters: 1, Words: 45, Reviews: 4, Complete

This could also be in Religion, but I put it in Love. This shows Jesus's true love for all of us. Please review!

The King

2008-08-20T19:41:46-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual/Hurt/Comfort
Chapters: 1, Words: 184, Reviews: 5, Complete

A true story told in the form of a poem.

Star Gazing

2008-08-19T06:16:27-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Romance
English, Rated: K+
Romance/Humor
Chapters: 1, Words: 237, Reviews: 8, Complete

This is a one shot romance story. This is my first romance story ever so please review!

Flower

2008-08-15T07:34:42-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: T
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 13, Reviews: 7, Complete

A very short, four line poem. It is short, but very true. Please review and God Bless!

Writer's Block

2008-08-14T08:10:29-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
General
English, Rated: K
General/Humor
Chapters: 1, Words: 61, Reviews: 7, Complete

I wrote this a while ago when I caught the writer's block virus. I just found it today, and changed the last stanza to make it sound better. Please review!

Right and Wrong

2008-08-14T07:33:35-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: T
Hurt/Comfort/Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 78, Reviews: 5, Complete

I'm a little unsure of this piece. It just came to me without planning. Please review! I really want to know what you think. I might just delete this piece. I know this poem might not be true to everyone.

Rachel Joy

2008-08-13T06:06:58-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
General
English, Rated: T
General/Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 60, Reviews: 5, Complete

Dedicated to a person who changed thousands of lives. Please read authors note and if you want; please review!

Erie

2008-08-12T18:02:23-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Nature
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 17, Reviews: 4, Complete

I recently took a trip to Erie and I wrote this very short poem during a storm. Please read and review! I'm a little unsure of the last line.

The Night

2008-08-07T18:36:07-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Haiku
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 13, Reviews: 11, Complete

A nature haiku about the night.

Tree Carvings

2008-08-04T19:56:05-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Haiku
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 13, Reviews: 7, Complete

I had a wonderful and memorable experience with my dad that inspired me to write this. Please review!

Raindrops

2008-08-04T19:39:20-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Nature
English, Rated: K
General/Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 54, Reviews: 3, Complete

Just a little story told in a poem.

Jesus

2008-08-04T19:13:52-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Haiku
English, Rated: K
Spiritual/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 11, Reviews: 7, Complete

This is my first attempt at a haiku. I didn't like haikus, but after reading so many of them; they have grew on me. So, please review! I'm open for ideas.

My Faith

2008-08-04T07:01:19-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K+
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 43, Reviews: 5, Complete

I wrote this a while ago when I was going through a hard time in my faith. Please review!

Eatin' an Artichoke

2008-08-01T05:12:30-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Humor
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 103, Reviews: 6, Complete

This is really a random poem. It just popped into my head.

Jealousy

2008-07-30T15:27:11-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 79, Reviews: 5, Complete

Just a poem I wrote talking about the problem of jealousy.

Rain

2008-07-30T13:47:14-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Nature
English, Rated: K
Spiritual/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 170, Reviews: 5, Complete

This is based off a personal experience. Please read and review!

Video Games

2008-07-28T11:23:46-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K+
General/Humor
Chapters: 1, Words: 278, Reviews: 6, Complete

This is slightly humorous. It's about playing on a video game. Please Review!

Tears

2008-07-25T18:51:54-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Spiritual
English, Rated: T
Hurt/Comfort/Angst
Chapters: 1, Words: 217, Reviews: 7, Complete

The title describes it all. This is short story, but a sad one. Please review.

Dear Readers,

2008-07-25T10:56:18-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
General
English, Rated: K+
General/Tragedy
Chapters: 1, Words: 12, Reviews: 12, Complete

This is a short, yet VERY true poem. God Bless!

The Creature

2008-07-25T10:13:45-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Action
English, Rated: K+
Adventure/Suspense
Chapters: 1, Words: 392, Reviews: 3, Complete

This is a short action packed story! Please read and review! God Bless!

The Mother Cat

2008-07-16T20:52:34-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Fable
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 693, Reviews: 6, Complete

I tried to include some morals into this short story, but I don't think that it worked out too well. Please review! It is about a greedy mother cat.

Just Me

2008-07-09T07:24:19-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 183, Reviews: 11, Complete

This is just one of my views on life. Please read the authors note at the end, because I explain what my poem means. Please Review!

Open Arms

2008-07-08T19:07:26-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: K
Spiritual/General
Chapters: 1, Words: 15, Reviews: 9, Complete

A remake also, this is a short 4 line piece about what God does for all of us.

Who Am I?

2008-07-08T13:59:39-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Life
English, Rated: K
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 104, Reviews: 5, Complete

My mom wrote this for a contest. Tell me what you think! This is where I got my inspiration to write.

The Passion

2008-07-08T12:55:25-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Essay
English, Rated: K+
General
Chapters: 1, Words: 149, Reviews: 5, Complete

In 6th grade I had to write a letter to my teachers telling them what I like to do. This is what I wrote with just some minor editing. I thought it was pretty good. Please review! I want to know what you think about it.

Beauty

2008-06-27T08:27:19-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Nature
English, Rated: K+
Poetry
Chapters: 1, Words: 50, Reviews: 9, Complete

A very short poem describing the beauty of nature. God Bless!

I Need You

2008-06-27T06:31:56-08:00

Author: PoetryQueen
Religion
English, Rated: T
Spiritual
Chapters: 1, Words: 80, Reviews: 5, Complete

This is somewhat of a desperate poem calling out to Christ. I have redone this piece and replaced it with the old one.