My name is vainya. I am currently in an Advanced Fiction Workshop at my college. I will be critiquing your work according to the guidelines set forth by my instructor. That is I will summarize your work, give praise on what is currently working, and give any suggestions that I think you need to make your work better. I expect your best work, that is send your work through the editor at least once.

I excel at analyzing the work and finding deeper meanings within the work. I do give constructive feedback, I'm not too mean. I am very good at character development when writing my own stories. So my characters are very well-developed most of the time. I also do dialogue well.

I sometimes miss the point intended for the story and if I do please let me know. I want to give an accurate analysis and if my summary is wrong do let me know. As a writer I am horrible at endings and sometimes flow. I am working to get better at that.

I love action, adventure, science-fiction and anything dark.

yaoi

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