R & R! Thanks : A sonnet that is supposed to be in iambic pentameter please give suggestions!

uniform sucks! lol

A poem about my guitar.

Pure Love loves without inhibitions. It is kind, understanding, and it comforts and heals. Pure Love is the person you love not for what they can give you, but for who they are. Pure Love heals and is healing

a poem about reality

His green orbs bore into mine and he grabbed me, slamming me back against the wall with more force than last time. His breath was ragged as he ran a hand down the length of my face, ending just below the band of my shorts. One-shot

Friday as school finishes

Originally "Snow if falling" by Shakin Stevens but I changed the words a bit so its now Sun is Shining

A short horror story told by a second grader in Mrs. Arthur's homeroom. I tried to boil down a horror story into just a couple hundred words.

Harley has been living a quiet life in Westchester bidding her time until she could get back to LA. But it spins out of control when the most popular girl in school finds out who her boyfriend is...here's a clue his occupation rymes with mock-car REVIEW!

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life is written in pen...but i prefer to draw with pencil...damn it.

I tend to think like this a lot...

I hated him, at leas what he became. Just when she thought she would have nothing to do with him, something happens and she doesn't want him to go

a little realization.

yup...that's me.

When you need to feel...

Une jeune Vampire. Voilà ce que je suis. Je ne vis plus, je ne dors plus, je ne ris plus …Car Il est là. Toujours là, derrière moi, à m’attendre, son sourire malicieux étirant ses divines lèvres. Un jour je m’échapperais. Et ce jour là, tout explosera.

It rhymes a little bit, but it's really not supposed to. I think it can be from a boys or girls point of view. Hope you guys like it! R&R please. -

A small story about a girl not sure where her relationship is going.

a fit of loneliness and desperation overwhelmed me . *

It's a story about a girl's journey to the United States. A mix of english/spanish - but mostly english

now Tallir's world would fall apart as he lay sprawled on the grass in the rain... by far my best and most powerful extract to date. Tallir is such a joy to write it's a shame to be so cruel to him, but that's the price my characters pay unfortunately:P

Tallir had the human woman pinned on the bench, and his jaws opened towards her throat... a spin off of my other fantasy series Eternity, which can also be found on fiction press. all you need to know for this particular extract is Rathes are demon dogs

Open your heart to the one you love...and be laid bare.