::Is coming up with a tune for that:: Good... You seemed so sad about a year ago! Aww... ::huggles::

great! that's exactly how i feel! you live to die. keep it up!

It's good, but maybe you shouldn't try so hard to rhyme. I like the message it conveys, but not all poetry (or even songs) have to rhyme. Good anyway, though. Prolly be better with music to back it up.

Way cool, I loved it

i truely loved it, write back to me if you have n e comments about n e thing i say

you try far to hard to rhyme...good...but that's my large critism.

Well done dude. Not bad, not bad at all...