greart poem! i've enver read a poem with quite this imagery but i really like it. very romantic, very nice. i ecspecially like the last line in parantheses. great job, keep it up!

bravo! lovely! wonderful! don'tcha just love it when ya write something that comes from *somewhere* deep inside??

you are too talented...keep it up!

Wow, what a great metaphor! Comparing love and a book like that is . . . ingenious! I love this poem! ^_^

Like it a lot. I wish someone would say that to me... lol ;)

Clever idea!
Nice descriptions and contrasts and comparisons- a fantasy, a romance.
Very sweet and wondrous until you feel closed off and upset 'you shut those covers before I'm through'.
Trying to convince you not to be scared or lonely- 'for I understand you'.
Nice descriptions of poetry/story in that stanza, by the way.
Very cute and sweet ending.
The whole piece is very thoughtful and interesting, pretty and unique.

That was so sweet! Now I am in this gushy mood, lol. When your readers feel something after reading your work you know you have been sucessful! Great poem!

Jade

Wow, great poem. Very inspiration. I'm sort of mad I hadnt thought of something like this! Lol, but it suprised me with its dept and romance, though in a strange way.

Forever and Always --
Lianna

PS I'll keep a note to update more often.

That is the BEST metaphor I've seen used for a romance before. This is excellent! I really love how completely you elaborated on the theme.
Thanks for reviewing for Shadowstorm 5&6 and Disruptions!

The only reason I visited your page was because you reviewed my stuff (how did you manage to get through all the other poetry to find me?) but i'm really glad I did. This is a really good poem, and it caters to a few of my beliefs in writing and in people. The only thing cliche is the subject but how you deal with it is wonderful...

Phenomenal. Your rhythym is square on the nose and your wording is beautiful. This poem is very inspirational, just because I read so much and I know the feeling. Anywho, I love it. You do a very nice job with it. An enthralling work of art; nice job. And thanks for reading and reviewing "Pointing Knife," I really appreciate it.
~Toireasa

interesting, its sweet in a way, i really love a good novel too, great job

This is one awesome piece if I could write a little bit like this I would tickled. You are a poet! Keep writing!!!

That's certainly an interesting way of showing romance. Very cool!

I like this very much..! Are you writing to all the aspiring poets of the world? ;) Your lines flow very smoothly -- Good job!