This was a great story! Such a waste that you did not continue. But if you ever do, i'll be here reading. haha

what a great story you should totaly have finished it!

This story is so amazing! I absolutely love it; you're a real talented and creative writer. I hope you decide to continue the story :D

Saw some third person POV:

She could hear the harsh, staccato breaths wheezing from the man and recognized it as it was. Fear.

I've enjoyed the story so far, its nice to read some ol' fashion thriller again. Been away to long.

Scales of Sapphire

This story is amazing. Why did you stop writing? :(

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

omg! you SO have to complete this story!

Oh! I can't wait until you update again. This story is incredible! I love the sexual tension between her and Gavin, but it was wrong for him to have done what he did. And then he gets mad at her, where the hell did he get off? Well, anyway. Love this story!

I love this story. Update PLEASE. SOON. =]

wow! are you ever going to finish it?

please update. and i thought there were to be more 'keia-gavin' goodness? haha. fic's got a lot of potential. it's good.

Bloody hell, girl. You haven't updated in TWO years? Word of advice; this story is ** AMAZING. Update!

Wow, I like it. Please update!!

Very interesting story... Gahh!! And you haven't updated it for two years. Given up?? I really don't think you should. It seems as though you are inches away from finishing (though I could be completely off-base). I'd love to find out what happens next, should you continue.

Just realised that I haven't seen this updated in forever, so I thought I'd come and give you a poke!

*poke*