Wonderful; love the images.

*Smiles* It's good, i think fictionpress messed with your format so sometimes it's hard to read.

acht, i simply cannot review any more. your poetry defies the pitiful tag of gratitude that would attempt to shine its pale and huaghty grandeur- merely instead leaving an inadequate blemish. i am sorry. this poem is grand and historical

I like it. I'm not sure I really understand it, but I think I do. Anyway good poem. See Ya