|Reviews for The Experiment|
| Rice-Ball247 11/19/05 . chapter 5
:P hard to believe that these two actually fall in love...or do they?
| Rice-Ball247 11/19/05 . chapter 4
T_T he broke her arm!
| Rice-Ball247 11/19/05 . chapter 3
lol poor birdies... :D i love the little wisecrack you put in there! it's just so bold - so witty - so...i think i'll stop there :P
| Rice-Ball247 11/19/05 . chapter 2
| Rice-Ball247 11/19/05 . chapter 1
lol that's really interesting. I can see that this story has quite a stable reputation...
| Juniper Nights 10/31/05 . chapter 65
| Shirel 10/1/05 . chapter 24
I love u! that is the only properly written love scene on this whole site that ive read so far and its not like hardcore or anything. its so beautiful. very nice job!
| Shirel 10/1/05 . chapter 23
Love, love, love the ending to this chapter! this whole story makes me want to have a quack for a teacher with a baby egg and a gorgeous hubby! I'm so in love!
| nathalsa 8/7/05 . chapter 67
OH, WHAT AN ADORABLE ENDING! *squees* I would go on to read the sequel, but I've been reading this for the past six hours and it's time to go to bed. x3 Au matin! _
| Riku E. Fallon 7/1/05 . chapter 67
Wow-wow-wow-wow-wow-wow... THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! You rock my world!
I have so many small comments from reading the story, but I've forgotten most of them. I'll see what I can recall.
Firstly, that scene with Kalli and the blue dye and the cops had me laughing so hard I couldn't breathe. I was in stitches all the way 'till the sad parts came up.
Um... vegemite? *shudders* From my visiting my uncle in Australia, I've concluded that that stuff is, in my opinion, a curse. *shrugs* Maybe you like it, but personally, I don't even find living in Australia worth having to down that stuff. . Yuck.
The chicken scene, the car at Toys 'R Us scene, so many moments had me laughing. The parts where their relationship struggled, I was nearly in tears. I loved these characters and I only loved them more as they grew and learned and discovered. It was really heartwarming and amazing to read, very touching and sad and inspiring all in one.
Normally I have a hard time with characters named Christian. I dunno why, but the name bugs me. But this story was so beautiful and he was so amazing that I got over it.
Of course, my favorites were easily Katelyn and Mai Li (Mai Li being a true source of inspiration and near-worship, the girl's awesome!).
Basically, I had one hell of a good time reading this, (even though I was slow and it took me more than half the story to realize that when you said football, you didn't mean the American kind, I'm so slow) and I'm very thankful that you put it up for us to read. Thanks for a long but enjoyable story, now I'm off to debate whether I prefer reading the sequel or actually getting a few hours of sleep into this night.
Please keep writing!
| CallMeCute 5/26/05 . chapter 67
| Raomina 5/21/05 . chapter 67
WOW! This story is great! Lots and lots of actions and fun, very original. Skipping to read the sequel!
| becxfok01 5/20/05 . chapter 67
Cool story! Haha, a bit mushy at times, but it was so cute! And am glad it was a pregnancy scare and not a real one. Anyways, am going to go read the sequel now. This was fantastic!
| Idiot Pilot 5/8/05 . chapter 22
Aww... even though Christian is a bit of a hoebag I still like him. " It so was not funny that my subconscious had a better sex life than me!" That made me laugh. :D
| depressed-and-bored 4/21/05 . chapter 62
Wait..you just cut off a huge bunch of events. WHY DIDN'T YOU ADD MORE TO HOW CHRISTIAN REACTED TO THE FAKE PREGNANCY!