|Reviews for The Experiment|
| kalicokitty15 10/24/02 . chapter 1
great story... I mean really awesome...
You can't have them actually sleep together... I mean come on... she's a virgin... let her stay a virgin for a while... she shouldn't do it with him at the "beginning" of the "relationship"
| angie 10/24/02 . chapter 12
Hey it's me again. I love your story. Do you think you could tell me when you update? Thanks a million.
| angie 10/24/02 . chapter 2
you have a nice story going on
| ladida 10/24/02 . chapter 12
*gasp* she's not gonna sleep with him is she? lol. they're so young, hahah. well do what you gotta do. ur work is much appreciated. thankyou...*sniffles* :oP
| mona 10/24/02 . chapter 1
its very good'
i am looking forward to the next chapter
| Pandemonium 10/24/02 . chapter 11
wow... this is an absolutely gorgeous ep! Still can't believe Marlow did that... and am questioning if she's angry/annoyed/happy about his last comment... but - wow
"thinking with your upper regions" - ha!
"I watched him shuffle his expression like a set of cards.. choosing which one he wanted to play." - love that!
"Correct me if I'm wrong Malow.. but having sex with your spouse was not one of the criterion!" - pmsl!
Brilliant ep, am interested to see where it leads :D
| wayweird 10/22/02 . chapter 10
i love your story. i get excited every day knowing i can come home and read it. i also want to give you props for kicking out those chapters so quick.
keep up the great work
| Pandemonium 10/22/02 . chapter 10
pmsl - hope it was a text book like my maths one... boy are they large...
I eventually got to it! Very good ep... glad to see Marlow's sticking up for her... but suspension? Couldn't she, at least, have argued she wasn't really involved?
One guess as to the next comment... *time's up* More! When you can, that is... as long as the "when you can" timeline fits in with "very soon" ;)
Thoroughly enjoying this, but you already knew that ;)
| purplepiano 10/22/02 . chapter 9
I really really love this story - its such a good idea and all the charecters seem so real! However, I have one teeny weeny bit of criticism - you use the word 'stated' way too much. e.g. "I'm glad, but I'm not Rachel" stated Christian as he opened the door. If you try using other words when people are speaking, it might be more effective. Other than that, its great, keep writing!
| Linda 10/21/02 . chapter 9
Ooo..good story. Can't wait to see what happens! Update soon please!
| KyLiE 10/21/02 . chapter 9
wow, what a story! it's AWSOME! update soon pleaz!
| Ellyria 10/20/02 . chapter 9
Yay! Good ending to this chapter. Update soon!
| Not Telling 10/20/02 . chapter 9
This Story Is Really Really Good And You Really Need To Keep Writing. I Absolutley Love It.
| LettuceGIrl 10/20/02 . chapter 9
Whoo hoo. They are being civil to each other. lol. :)
| Jaylin 10/20/02 . chapter 9
That was beautiful. ::clapping:: good job