|Reviews for Love Holds Time Still|
| UnShure Dreamer 6/11/04 . chapter 1
The words in this poem are very wonderfully put. Its sad and i can relate, but good job!
| KatyGirl1219 11/2/03 . chapter 1
::sniffles:: Empathy...(sorry for brevity)
| futagoat02 9/11/03 . chapter 1
aw, sweet. nice rhyming... did i spell that right? oh well..
| MistrissD 5/21/03 . chapter 1
I love the shortness of each line and how it rhymes so perfectly, it flows so nicely, your so talented, keep it up!
| Pandista 1/13/03 . chapter 1
This is my favorite poem of yours so far. ::Adds to her favorites list:: :o)
| Squire Kali 12/24/02 . chapter 1
Really beautiful. There's this thing called closure, that most don't offer. Oh well, it lets us write nice angsty poetry. Keep writing!
| Mystifying 12/5/02 . chapter 1
Ah so true! Nice poem to read, especially since I know what that feels like. Anyways about the poem structure itself, I liked the whole beat thing you have going on
| Carter Tachikawa 11/3/02 . chapter 1
Very sweet. Keep it
| Catgirl Rahen 10/26/02 . chapter 1
I like it! It's very pretty. Keep writing.
| EiDa 10/10/02 . chapter 1
So nice. Your style is simple yet unique. Keep it up!
| VOIDKing Ki 10/9/02 . chapter 1
This poem touched me because I feel pretty much the same way about someone. I likes the rhyming too. Keep on writing!
| obsidian katana 10/8/02 . chapter 1
wow...this is a great poem! i love it!
| DefianceIsMe 10/8/02 . chapter 1
Yea that was sweet. You could probably work on a better rhyme for times cuz I dont think that line is working the way it is. Don't take offense its just a suggestion. I did like the meaning of the poem tho. So romantic...
| WildMonkeyDanceAroundFire 10/8/02 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. It's something people can relate too. And it sounds like it comes from the heart. Good job!