The words in this poem are very wonderfully put. Its sad and i can relate, but good job!

::sniffles:: Empathy...(sorry for brevity)

Keep writing!

::hugs::

aw, sweet. nice rhyming... did i spell that right? oh well..

baibaiyukie

I love the shortness of each line and how it rhymes so perfectly, it flows so nicely, your so talented, keep it up!

This is my favorite poem of yours so far. ::Adds to her favorites list:: :o)

Tweek's Panda

Really beautiful. There's this thing called closure, that most don't offer. Oh well, it lets us write nice angsty poetry. Keep writing!

Ah so true! Nice poem to read, especially since I know what that feels like. Anyways about the poem structure itself, I liked the whole beat thing you have going on

Very sweet. Keep it

I like it! It's very pretty. Keep writing.

Catgirl

So nice. Your style is simple yet unique. Keep it up!

This poem touched me because I feel pretty much the same way about someone. I likes the rhyming too. Keep on writing!

wow...this is a great poem! i love it!

Yea that was sweet. You could probably work on a better rhyme for times cuz I dont think that line is working the way it is. Don't take offense its just a suggestion. I did like the meaning of the poem tho. So romantic...

This is beautiful. It's something people can relate too. And it sounds like it comes from the heart. Good job!