are you gonna update? plz update!

whaa! you are a very talented author; i enjoyed reading this very much, and i can't wait for the next up date! please keep going!

You have a wonderful style of writing, of building suspense, and a knack in finishes. Which is why I am going to continue reading after a little nap *rubs eyes* ...

Oh VERY good! There's nothing wrong with your story, but I do envy you cause you tend to put more detail into your chpts then I could...>< *sighs* Anyway, keep up the good work and I'll be checking around to see if ya updated! Laterz!

Gah! What a place to leave us hanging!

Now, I'm afraid that the Being Bloody Annoying Act 1528 compels me to complain about *something*, but it's rather hard with a story as good as this one. The only thing I can find (and I've tried, oh how I've tried) is in chapter 2: "An observer may comment.." I really think that "might" would work better than "may" here.

Ahem. Actually, I was wondering whether later on there'd be a were-rat known as Wolf, just to annoy the readers. I'm sorry, I'm babbling. Cheers for the read, even if there ought to have been more. (And the huge white spaces are an original touch - they do build suspense.)

*points at VladimirsAngel* It's her fault.

^_^ This story is good- very good. You still going?

*pokepokes*

More chapters wolf?

Pleeeease?

^_^

*bows*

Very good, wolf! I love your descriptions....damn that hair-between-the-toes! ^_^

more please!