Actually I am not one for sappy poems, but this was beautiful. The piece actually seemed to move like a wave, decending to the pits of being lost to rising into someones love. Bravo. You made me smile today with this one, thanks.

o0o0o0o I like it! I haven't read your stuff in a while... and I relate to this totally :)

That's so sweet.

i loved it so much that i copied and pasted it to show orlando... its very romantic..

aw, tis sweet! god job!

Oh, this made me sigh one of those little woman sighs...XP

It was wonderful...I truly did enjoy it.

Please keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw

WOW, sweet! You were right, this is a sweet poem. Nice rhyme too. The only problem is, I don't know anything to say about it, it's just soo sweet!. I don't think I have anything more to say. Just keep going the way you have been until now, and you'll be just fine!

wow, i really love this...it is so awesome and i can just relate that to my life and sit here and think, y cant i write sumthing like that...well thats all! bye

Hey,
Excellent, this is truely excellent. I really think it applies to a lot of people. Its great Annalise and i really like it, keep up the good work