This was NOT bad. You lie. LIE I TELL YOU!

You're a great poet! Don't doubt yourself.

Keep writing.

~Namir Swiftpaw

Nice poem, once more. Here too I noticed some referrences to Greek mythology, I'll have to study it some time. Just like your other ones, this one's nice too. Keep it up!

I found this poem to be much more enjoyable than this author's other work, "Pure Joy". Maybe I just like the post-apocalyptic setting, but I found it to be a fine example of melancholy poetry. It seems to have a relatively deep meaning behind it, and it conveys the feeling of an immense and unyielding sorrow. All in all, it was a fantastic poem that carries with it a central theme of sadness and despair.

oo. very deep. me likie! grr...u'r too good! it's not fair lol
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katie

I definitely don't think it sucks. I like how you word everything "The days fly by The end is near The world now weeps The end is here" Awesome job

-Jessie