wonderful job! the title is great, and this flows very nicely...your work is so unique. my english teacher would like you.

Ausgezeichnete Gedichte, Anja! Es freut mich. I hope I spelt all that right and didn't say "Are you arguing my garbage collector's duckling" or something. Es war sehr schoen.

Wow. I am so envious of your writing. The words flow so naturally, so honestly. Lovely. Need I say more?

Masterful, truly masterful.
You really are one of the most talented poets I know, JD. Your perception and the depth of your feelings and understanding is rampant in your perfectly crafted words. Most people can only dream of such gifts, but I can hardly think of anyone more deserving than you.
Always Amaze.
-S

i'm glad you posted this elsewhere than your diary, so now i can review it. holy **, JD. you're.... wow... publishable. i dunno... just... moving.

"panther-padding-grace" "broken wings and uncrowned kings" awesome poem. Your style is... interesting. I like it. Great poem, keep it up!

-Jessie