Aw. I love the sequel. So. I loved the plot twist with the Vilya/Resc/Yerin relationship. It was awesome. I love how Resc and Vilya ended up together. I was rooting for him all along. I really, really loved the sequel. I thought the ending was a bit sudden but it was alright. It's a good series.

Yay! He's healing! Maybe it's because his old master died? Or maybe I'm over-speculating.

That's cute! I love your writing style! It's great. You're a really good fantasy writer. I'm looking forward to the sequel.

Aw. Sad...I was learning to hate Averial, too, but now I just feel sorry for him. Poor Daemir, two traumatic experiences within an hour of each other...

Oh, god. Yerin is not only insane, but also idiotic! I knew Resc would be better, since the beginning of the first story!

Aw! Adorable-ness!

Oh my god, Yerin is insane. It's kind of scary, really...

Oh. Did Yerin really sleep with someone else? Or did he just say he was going to? This is really good. I like how you develop your characters, by making them one type of person, and then making them change gradually without becoming OOC. It's really good!

Whoa, creepiness...

Aw. Resc is adorable. He's my favorite. Where Yerin tries to push Vilya, Resc keeps him from going too far, even when Vilya doesn't know what he wants, Resc does. They're cute...

I want to cry...Poor Vilya...

Wa ... so many twists. That child is Vilya's isn't it? I can't wait till the sequal, since there's so many unresolved loose ends in this one. I can feel that something big is going to happen with the prophecy. I'll be waiting to read more ^^

I cried.

ARGH! How could he forgive that jackass so easily?!?!?!?1 I always liked resc better, in any case.
*stabs Yerin*

I loved both of these stories. I hope that there is more to come, it seems like you were leading upto something good.