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| Pyreflei 2005-01-11 ch 1,   | I like this poem very much. I, too, share a love for angels and all species that inhabit the heavenly realms of this and other planes of existence. This poem is very sad, isn't it? Who exactly is it about, I wonder? Is it about the angel? I can't really tell, but I like it all the same. There are times, I think, when something touches us in a place we don't entirely understand, and it just feels beautiful. This poem is one of those things. You're a very talented writer. Have you ever thought about publishing? I think that it would be worth while for you to do that... That, or wait until you're dead and haunt your descendants to make sure that they don't burn your precious poetry. Just kidding. Overall, I enjoy your writing style very much, so please keep writing with as much enthusiasm and love that you have. |
| Shadafakup 2003-05-21 ch 1, | Man.. That was amazingly beautiful.. I loved it.. Especially the last two lines.. Good rhyming and great flow to the poem.. Made me think.. Neat work.. |
| NotEnough 2003-05-20 ch 1, | This is so sad. It is very thought provoking. Very beautiful. |
| Renn 2003-04-28 ch 1, | wow. that's...man, I don't even know a word in English to express what I think...I'll just say it in French: magnifique et merveilleux. ^^sorry |
| A. J. Montgomery 2002-10-10 ch 1, | Ohh...I like it. Especially the first/last stanza's last line. Makes me wish stealing other's people ideas (thus words) wasn't wrong, because believe me, that would be the first one I stole. That and maybe e.e. **'s, "forgetting me, remember me." Oh, but I'm rambling. Sorry ;) |
| Corrinth 2002-10-10 ch 1, | Beautiful. So sad, with such a clear view of the way the world can be. I have no doubt that this poem got you high marks (assuming you were writing it FOR you're English class, I myself have a tendancy to write when I'm not supposed to!) Good luck with any further stuff!) |
| Wrong Name Tag 2002-10-10 ch 1, | "A song all at once so right yet so wrong" Awesome poem. "melody" and "grief" in the second stanza really doesn't seem to work because the rest of the poem is in a rhyme scheme, maybe if you change it it will sound even better, but it's up to you ^_^ excellent poem though -Jessie |