this is is beautiful, with some lovely descriptions. it reminds me a little bit of that poem about the fog creeping in on little cat feet (i cant remember what it's called or who it's by) but this poem has a much darker take on it all. good though, very good

You're right there was a lot of lines, but I loved the poem so it did not matter.

i like! very good descriptions. sorry i suck at reviews, but i think this is a good poem. hey, thanks for reviewing my story, i'm glad you liked it.
-morgan moonsphinx

*shivers uncontrollably* wow. that is awesome

OMG! THAt WAS SOOOOOO GOOD! Kinda creepy....BUT MUCHO GOOD, CHICA! LOL! I LOVED IT!