*obligingly applique's bitchslap* *I* like you. That counts for two, to be considerate to Lilith, my slightly shadier side. Remember that now.

nice poem,
gotta say, that ending, really finishes it off nicely!

Love it I think your great at freeverse

I've said this before but I'll say it again. Darkness. Ah, the refreshingness of it all.

Licia aka Persley Snow

reveiwing, and loved it

'I dance on that wicked edge
I do it to ** You off'

LOVE those last lines. Hell, I love the whole poem!

I really like this poem. It's very emotional and metaphoric. I think you did an awesome job!