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Reviews For: Kids In Desert
Izzy Diz
2003-09-17
ch 1, 		abusesounds a lot lk survivor... BUT KIDS?? Um the charachters were confusing b/c there were so many. 20 sum including the bodygaurd. Well please keep going and if you get a chance, come review my stry(ies) Thanks!
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