Beautiful and very sad. There're a few typos but I'll just mention one thing in this review: "I know you're wondering why

But some things are never left unsaid."

I assume you meant 'some things are better left unsaid'? If you didn't then I just misunderstood it so ignore me *G* But I think it makes more sense the way I thought it would be.

Anyway, reading on!

Very moving...great imagery

talking to her blood, her only remains, while blue tears dot your throat. oh, this is touching. The line: "Your blood lies on the floor/eerie conmtrast" is such powerful imagery. Did this really happen to you?

Wow... that was very angsty and strong. My eyes started watering until I just couldn't keep it in. I started bawling at "Don't come join me too soon." Very strong piece of work.