well written

hmmmm, i really don't know what to say.

this poem reflected my father and i almost to a ti. he gave up on me a long time ago and told me many lies. but i hope for both you and i we can find not something to replace that hole but a different way to look through it.

-Jasmine

This, by far, has been THE MOST touching poem I've read in a very long time. You SHOULD give thought of writing a short story. K.I.U!

Peace/Love

MuseKun