wow, thats lovely. sombre, full of sad bittersweet memories. Nice!

Hello!

I love the imagery and the feeling that this piece invokes. I especially liked the last verse, there's just something about it... I quoted it in my tumblr and linked it back here, I hope you don't mind but if you do I'll take it down. : ) Thanks!

it's a sailors song... i want to say. I want to imagine a cool, foggy grey day with the ringing of a bell on a boat that's coming into harbor when i read this. you've captured something here

Every time I read this, I feel like crying.

Da du den Faust auf Deutsch zitierst, wage ich es mal und antworte ebenso, das 110l. Review, was mir ziemlich rekordverdächtig erschein, aber die anderen haben Recht, ein schönes, vielschichtiges und melodiches Gedicht!

Wow. That's beautiful.

Oh wow,
that is unbelievably beautiful. Thanks for your dedication to the poem. :)

i loved the concept of the last stanza

Wow. Amazing free verse.

that was good and sad

I read this long ago...don't know why I hadn't reviewed...it's very sad...Atlantis has always been an object of fascination for me, but I've never felt up to the task of writing a poem about it...this is, well, it's obviously about more than just Atlantis, and it's very mythical and moving, especially the last stanza...it's a short poem, but that just makes the feeling more ethereal...great job :)! Love, Mia

Wow. Wow. Wowowow.

Wow. I love the imagery and depth you bring to this. Glorious. Nicely done!

abby

reminds me of the lost city of atlantis

what a beautiful concept

you should be proud of it.wonderful is what it is

This is short, yet a poem with a meaning of depth in it. Other words, I love it. And about writing it in many months, I think I understand how you feel. Lastly, thank you so much for the review. I'd love to talk to you again.

Just the word atlantis is cool enough in itself, and aside from what this poem is actually about, the words all fit into the title. (if that... makes sense...), which is why it feels so right.

I cannot believe this is your 100th review! My highest is about... ten? (But I'm not complaining, those were ten nice reviews.) So well done to you. And thanks for your review.