Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!

the last part was just pure perfection. loved it.

Really Good!

That last stanza is haunting...

The last stanza was genius... very nice imagery

haunting.. it won't leave my head.

Wow. something to think about, you know? :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

Bubbly Girl

wow, thats lovely. sombre, full of sad bittersweet memories. Nice!

Hello!

I love the imagery and the feeling that this piece invokes. I especially liked the last verse, there's just something about it... I quoted it in my tumblr and linked it back here, I hope you don't mind but if you do I'll take it down. : ) Thanks!

it's a sailors song... i want to say. I want to imagine a cool, foggy grey day with the ringing of a bell on a boat that's coming into harbor when i read this. you've captured something here

Every time I read this, I feel like crying.

Da du den Faust auf Deutsch zitierst, wage ich es mal und antworte ebenso, das 110l. Review, was mir ziemlich rekordverdächtig erschein, aber die anderen haben Recht, ein schönes, vielschichtiges und melodiches Gedicht!

Wow. That's beautiful.

Oh wow,

that is unbelievably beautiful. Thanks for your dedication to the poem. :)

i loved the concept of the last stanza