Impressive. I like the way you've written this, and the way that the two characters have come together. I think that this is the part that really gets me, though:

" I shove him away from me angrily. “If I hadn’t, you would’ve probably gotten an infection and DIED!”

“Did you ever think I might be happier that way?” he yells, shoving me back hard, sending me sprawling onto the floor. I stare up at him as he continues to yell in fury. “My entire life has been one ** up thing after another! My parents hated me! Ignored me! Beat me! I have no friends! No one to love! No one to love me! I’m being ** molested by a goddamn teacher! My parents are dead! I have no money! No way to take care of myself! And I’m probably going to be put on the ** street when the house is repossessed! I think I’d be better off DEAD!” He whirls around suddenly, slamming his fist into the wall behind him, punching it through the plaster. He falls to his knees slowly, shaking, leaning his forehead against the wall. “I’m so goddamned lonely,” he whispers harshly."


Yeah... so that's my favorite part. I read it and I was like, "oh my god, I feel so sorry for him."
So anyways. i know this story is discontinued, but it sounded cool, so I read it anyways... Maybe you can write ONE more chapter? Pretty Please? with a cherry on top?(get your mind out of the gutter, hehe!) -get5s down on knees and begs-
Lee

erm whos taller? cole or uh...wats his name? oh yeah luke?

maybe i missed it or something

i cant seem to remember wat they look like...

DOH!

me really like ur story though!

aw breath* aw

oh he loves him! oh yes he does!

omg! poor coley! aw its so sad! i just wanna suffocate him to death with huggles

WOW THAT KISS POPPED OUTA NO WHERE! LIKE A PREMATURE BABY OR SOMETHNG!

OMG, please update soon! I wanna read what happens!

This is a really cool story. Even my cat likes it. Or should I say, likes to lay on my keyboard when I'm reading it... ^_^ Anyway, I really want to read some more of your writing.

Wow. It's been a while since you've updated this. I must say it's a shame since I find it to be a great fic. I hope you do update it and finish it sometime soon.

Very lovely story, hun. I really like it! Now, update cause I wanna see what happens! ...and I wanna see Luke and Cole do something together for once and NOT half-assed like some authors do.

Wo. I love this story! It's so awesome!

Please please please update soon!

~Kyle's Precious Little Girl

damnit write summore i was into the god damned story its bloody good gr* glairs daggers in to u till u write more of the story* >,

The worst thing is that you don't seem to plan on updating this. It's a fun beginning, and I admit I'd love to read more, even though the ending could really go only one way now. I might have to look up your profile and see if you have any more recent ones.

Wow, this is like the epitome of high school angst and drama with a dash of slash. Please, please, please say you're still working on this and haven't abandoned Cole and Luke!

Oh, snap, I just realized the last time you updated was nearly three years ago...Any chance you'll be updating soon? Because this is really good! ~prod~

~seraphim-rush

RAWRR! Luke is so very debonair when it comes to persuasion. xD