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Roya7
2008-07-05
ch 11,
abusewow, such a nice story! I read a one-shut story from you before and now with this one, you are one of my favorite authors! :D

Thanks for the story, very well written! I loved the characters especially Sasha! *.*

Something that I notice and was a little hard to believe, was the way Sasha was rescued by those four guards! I mean how they did know where to find Issai in a big palace! and how come there were no other guards to notice them!? I mean I shouldn't be that easy to sneak to a palace without anyone notice it!

Let me see ... em yes, I would have preferred to see more of their families, both!

At last, I think you mentioned a sequel for this story! :D Have you written it?! or any intentions anymore?!

Well, I guess that's it! Thanks again for sharing! ^_^
Phoenex360
2007-09-12
ch 11,
abuseMy god... that was... beautiful... *tear* YOu got me... crying! I love... LOVE this story so darn much... How could you come up with it all? The last chapter in particular... the way he described why he loved him... I am humled by your skill. Everything about this story was wonderful. I hope you know that.

Sasha's shyness... the way you shroud his past in mystery. How you make him so unsure one moment then gallent and unfearing the next.

Issai's love for his angel. How he acts carefull around Sasha, not wanting him to sink into depression.

How the story unfolds... the way you use descriptions of physical and mental objects... how you get them to act real... alive.

You weave a very realistic and believable tale. Unfortunattely... I don't think 13 year olds ack like his sister did. ;) I myself just turned 13, and never in my grade has anyone acted with such innocence. Though there were some faults, you definately made up for them, few as there was. I look forward to reading more pf your work, and I despair in the knowledge that it takes much longer to write something than to read it.

Wow... I actually seem formal in my choice of words. XD Damn me and my large, but compressed, vocabulary. And damn my inability to fully express how I feel with words.

~360~
JustAFairyTale
2007-08-01
ch 11,
abuse*sniff* *sniff* omg that was SO sad! wished it was longer tho =( but i'm just here to boost your ego for writing just a lil bit ^^
Midnights Scream
2007-07-29
ch 6,
abuseawh. it's very sweet yet sad and I must day that your characters waste no time falling in love.:)
Amerez
2007-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI just wanted to let you know I loved the story. Your writing is so beautiful and melodic, when I started reading it I went ga ga over it. Keep up the good work
paputsza
2007-04-29
ch 1,
abuse... it's like if you've read one key story you've read them all, but not. o.O it's hard to be certain.
Esquirella
2006-10-25
ch 11,
abuseWhat an incredible story!
Kir Sirin
2006-10-22
ch 11,
abuse-sighs- where to begin? Where to begin? Well, I guess I can start off by saying, "Holy ** girl you rock!!" Haha, my friend gave me this story, and damn it was so good! I stayed up till 3:14 a.m. just to finish this! Thanks to my dads secret laptop! Yay. Ugh. My eyes burn and my spine feels like its about to snap in two. But I dont care! This was such an awesome story! That whole "Sinfully soft skin" part was perfect!
... I tried to make this a short comment and look what happens!
the pirateKing
2006-10-20
ch 11,
abuseI actually don't know what to say, besides the fact that this story was SO well written, I'm completely jealous of your "
skillz." Haha, I enjoyed every part of this, and your descriptions were so vivid and detailed, I could picture everything so clearly. This story was a relief to all that trash, and junk out there. Stories like this make me grateful that reading and writting exsist. Don't lose that talent, because I'm begging for some more, but I don't know if I'll get it. :I

!pirateKing.'
TGB
2006-09-30
ch 11, anon.
abuseThis story is so wonderfully written I'm almost willing to let the "alot" in chapter nine slide. Almost...

I look forward to reading your other work. I hope it is as pleasing as this was.
TGB
2006-09-30
ch 4, anon.
abuseOMG! I'm Sasha's biggest fan right now, I really am.

This story is wonderfully written. So wonderful, in fact, that I haven't even LOOKED for a spelling or grammar mistake!

Lady Tempest, I salute you.
Lovers of Eden
2006-07-04
ch 6,
abusethey're so mean to him... because he's albino?

...

Harsh.
a stranger
2006-01-04
ch 11, anon.
abuseI thought to express my deep appreciation for your writing, but it seems you have heard from others more than my humble words can express. With what little time I have to spare on such matters, it is authors like you who draw me to return to this site now and again. Had I but discovered your stories sooner, I might have enjoyed them longer. I thank you.
Yorugami Ahou
2005-12-23
ch 11,
abuseWow...this story is so amazing.I love your writing style...And how you characterized Sasha and Issa..is so beautiful.You give such depth to your characters...I love sap in the right amounts and you've done it well. :D
Amour Amorita Saphira
2005-11-28
ch 11,
abuseThat was marvoloues. SO captivating and sweet. I've once again fallen in love with another one of your stories. I love the words you use when Issai was describing his adoration and prove how beautiful Sasha is. Very very peotic and lovely^^ It was great on thier growth in relaitionship and as you've said the lack of information of Sasha's background is still questionable. The nightmare is also a very nice scene of resemblence of his insecuriies and train of thoughts. A very inticing story. Just lovely!!
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