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PaperLanterns
2003-02-26
ch 1,
Very well written. your rhyming is good, and doesn't sound at all forced, almost shakespearean.anyway, it was a little sad and maybe it hit a little too close to home than is comfortable. but other than that little depressing factor, well done.
Goat Woman
2002-11-03
ch 1,
Yea, Self mutilation is bad, k!!!! I know that you wouldn't but still. I have to do the 'I'm your best friend and if you do kill yourself i will bring you back to life and beat you to death with a spoon' thing. Ok!!! SO, this was amazing. don't be sad little bit! I think that i was sad enough for da both of us!!!! lol

Love you nd love your work...stupid sarah making me rhyme...all the time!!! lol SEE, rhymin again!

Love Annie
jflower
2002-10-25
ch 1,
i really liked that.
Lord Jareth
2002-10-17
ch 1,
Sexy. Don't ask why.
not sure yet
2002-10-14
ch 1,
very sad, but nicely written, good job
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