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| PaperLanterns 2003-02-26 ch 1, | Very well written. your rhyming is good, and doesn't sound at all forced, almost shakespearean.anyway, it was a little sad and maybe it hit a little too close to home than is comfortable. but other than that little depressing factor, well done. |
| Goat Woman 2002-11-03 ch 1, | Yea, Self mutilation is bad, k!!!! I know that you wouldn't but still. I have to do the 'I'm your best friend and if you do kill yourself i will bring you back to life and beat you to death with a spoon' thing. Ok!!! SO, this was amazing. don't be sad little bit! I think that i was sad enough for da both of us!!!! lol Love you nd love your work...stupid sarah making me rhyme...all the time!!! lol SEE, rhymin again! Love Annie |
| jflower 2002-10-25 ch 1, | i really liked that. |
| Lord Jareth 2002-10-17 ch 1, | Sexy. Don't ask why. |
| not sure yet 2002-10-14 ch 1, | very sad, but nicely written, good job |