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ravenswings 2005-10-21 ch 14,	abuse^^ Aw! the lucexgod stuff is so adorable. >< why cant god admit it though. T.T Love this fic. ^^ shounen ai is so great... giggles
despairingshadow 2005-05-31 ch 2, anon.	abuseHere is your second review off me! As promised i will review every single chapter of every heavenly chaos story either until you relent and start posting ANYWHERE again or until you get yourself published, now as long as one of those happens soon i'm pretty much a happy bunny ^^ ciao! xx
despairingshadow 2005-05-27 ch 1, anon.	abuseokay, look i know you said that you were moving the heavenly chaos series to another place, but even following your link i cant find it. please could you send me the next chapters in your series? please update on fictionpress? and even if you dont want to can you email me the chapters? please? you may notice that i've only reviewed on the first chapter of the first story...that is because i will review every single chapter in an attempt to get you to send me the chapters!! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please? PLEASE?! I love your fics more than anything and your artwork on deviant art, i love you! please continue to make my days better by letting me read new chapters! Thank you thank you thank you! x
Profiterole 2004-11-10 ch 14,	abuseI love this story! You're an excellent writer! Angels are great characters (I'm a fan of Yuki Kaori's "Angel Sanctuary"). This story is really interesting, with God being all desperate about the suffering of innocent people. But it's also very funny, especially the footnotes. All the couples are great, but my favourite pairing is definitely God x Lucifer. That's such a cool idea! Besides, it kinda makes sense. lol And I like Gaia, because I can identify with her. Congratulations for this wonderful story! I'll read the other parts of "Heavenly Chaos" later.
afk 2004-07-02 ch 14,	abusewoow! this was so fun i laughed so much! it's really great i'm looking foward fro the sequel (i sthere going to be yaoi or only shounen-ai?? O.o) anyway i luved the chariies! drool
dust2dust 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuse::still laughing:: I've only read the first chapter and already I think it's great... It's hilarious :D I liked the fight between God and Lucifer. ::hurries away to read the rest of the story::
Laura 2004-02-13 ch 14, anon.	abuseHow long has this been here! Why was I not informed! Wait ... i probably was informed, stupid me. Any way, I'm happy I found this, it is SO FUNNY! God almost had a panic attack there. Lu got off lightly, I thought god was going to smite him.
Angel Althea 2003-08-06 ch 14,	abuseoops...I only realized now that you had posted the epilogue ^^;well, better late than never, don't ya think?? That was really fun to read!^^
Germaine Amundsen 2003-07-18 ch 14,	abuseWhee! huggles the entire male cast I wanna be friends with all of 'em! 'Specially Metatron! nods Yup. Well, I'd better get started on the next one. This is so awesome! bounces away ... ... bounces back I love you! skitters into the distance
Imagination Version 7.0 2003-06-04 ch 13, anon.	abuseWOW! That was awesome! Now I've got the warm fuzzies, must go write one! SO kool. BTW... Can I get a bumper sticker that says I Love Lucifer? (I'd probly get mugged though)
dreams in flight 2003-06-04 ch 13,	abuseAww, such a cute story. I liked it. Anna
itoshii-youkai 2003-06-02 ch 1,	abuseAh-hahaha, "i;m not senile i'm omnipotent" heh, funny...i'll keep reading
Shadafakup 2003-05-28 ch 13,	abuseI just had to finish it.. But bah.. no.. I dont like the endin.. It was sweet yes, but everythin just happened at once.. I kinda expected somethin more the way you wrote you A/N in chap1.. ... I dont know-- i felt you should have elaborated.. The buildup in the story had no time to end properly.. It just kinda crashed down onto the reader.. Suddenly all the couples just decided to show affection towards each other.. And all at the same time.. It was out of place, and it seemed slipshot.. Especially with the tension build up in the storm.. It was a good metaphor I would say.. However, the conversation between Michael n Gaia was also starkly out of place.. Overall-- it was interestin.. But please inform me if you have plans of repost because the endin does not deserve the fantastic start you had.. Enough said.. The plot was original and interestin.. An enjoyable read..
Shadafakup 2003-05-28 ch 1,	abuseWoot.. That's so damn cute.. Erm-- well God n Lucifer kinda weird they actually "reconciled" but oh wellz.. What the heck.. Just thought I'll drop a not before I continue.. I might not be able to read so fast.. But heh-- cute cute cute.. The argument is so amusin.. Lol.. Goin to the next chap.. So see you soon :)
Dreams Coast 2003-05-19 ch 13, anon.	abuseOh! I love this!! Everything is so so so amazing! You're a very talented writer, and I hope to see more of this series and your works, original or fan, in the near future. -Dreams (believe)

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