I also really like your imagery...
You’re telling of patient moons, and tingling rain, and speaking to gods. Very powerful.
The end didn't do so well though. It wasn't as powerful as the rest... for me at least.
But other than that, this is a gem.

Whoa.. I really liked this.. Its damn well done.. N i esp like these lines..
"To touch the fire of the sun as it towers overhead to relieve the clouds of their dreary task

To taste the salty tears of each massive and crashing ocean

To walk the paths of the ancient Egypt and watch the prism colored sky come alive "

Full of imagery.. cool.. real cool..

...Absolutely amazing.

...I really can't think of anything to say. Just...mind blowing.

Superb work.

~Namir Swiftpaw