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| Melitta 2003-04-12 ch 1, | I thought "Staying Up Too Late" was rather forced, so my attention wandered. However, I loved "Am I?" and thought that was very well done. |
| Stormer 2002-12-14 ch 1, | Each poem has a very distinct mood surrounding it. The latter one seemed darker than the others. As usual, very nice writing! |
| Kormation 2002-10-14 ch 1, | Well, I have to say, I haven't seen someone structure out their poem that way, in a long time. So that was pretty original (poet's are like cuisine, you have to try them all!). Good rhyming rhythm, really makes the poem go fast, and the wording has been selected well, so its not clumsy, it makes the poem run smoothly. Some good personally endented into the poem too, such as the line 'That’s cheesy, not too breezy, Certainly not easy.' Reminds me of myself. Is this the case for yourself? Hard to wake up? Anyways, a rather enjoyable and originally set out poem. |