This was beautful, and oh so true.

Sal

wow, i've never really read anything like this before. your metaphor use here is really something! what really send shivers down my spine was "Your eyes are now the sky.." incredible way of describing writing.

I enjoyed reading this very much, keep up the good work! :-)

Yay! I absolutley love your poem!*jumps up and down* It's so cool! You definately deserve more reviews *glares at unsuspecting FFnet goers*! I hope you get trillions more!

Rich, lyrical, in a total un-poem format;

It rawks. _;;; Very cool.

Omg... I am loving this... ::glomps Marley's poetry::

Raven