im crying again lol! i think its awesome! this matt dude is a very lucky guy

Sweet.(Please excuse my girliness) This is so good, so give yourself credit. I hope this guy knows what he has right now and I'm sure he'll love this poem. Lovely. Great work, keep it up!

Poetry with the meaning of the heat of a thousand suns, yet darkness swirls around it. Continue your work

Aw...this is so sweet. I love some of the images. My only problem is you repeat holding something close in the second verse; you should probly think of a new metaphor. Other than that I really like this. lovies, pointythings

Altho it doesn't have any form, I thought it was sweet and had a beautiful message. Nice idea!

That is a lovely peice! I hope Matt appreciated it. WD

Even though this poem didnt have an organized form i stil thought it was great.

...i thought...well...ummz...i dunno what i thought actually. I mean its kind of a cold poem.. but not the cold we think of today... I dont know i can't explain it.. ya know??... what else...very...depressing...and...it sounds like almost a poem about no matter what you were gonna do..married or not... that you we're gonna drop everything for him... and thats not the way to go... trust me... i had one of those relationships... and i broke it off because i didn't need that...no one should have control over someone like that.

I really thought it was amazing. And by the way you write you could not be a screw up.

i feel the same way about a guy. his name is chase, but don't tell.

This is so sweet. Your great at writing you but alot of feeling in this.

Oh!! Lovely! :)

Vnomi. ;)

awww....so sweet. i think everyone can relate...

::closes eyes and smiles:: warm and hallmarky.

Ladies and Gentlemen, the one she speaks of is I, and let me tell you something, this poem, this ode to love which we share to the core of our very souls, is probably the purest and sweetest girl I've ever known, and I am made a better and happier person every second I am in her presance, whether it be face to face or IM to IM across two countries. If you, who read this, can find a love like my angel, "A", then you've no need to die because you'll have already found heaven.

I love you, "A" (I'm with-holding her name for privacy issues, plus I don't want you dudes out there getting any ideas about my sweetygirl. ;)


Signed, with love,
Punko Finnieous McMac

*sob...sob...*
Touching...I feel the same about a guy named Jimmy.