My friend Sean died in a motorbike accident on October 11, 2002. There are less than 600 students in my whole high school, so almost everyone knew him. I really know what you're feeling, I felt that same way too. A strange coincidence that I hope you dont take offense to, is my name is Jennifer Marie and I have lymphoma (cancer of the lymph nodes). Isn't it strange how things are? Anyway...I reviewed your other story too, but I want to clarify that I'm not always that crazy...

-LaureLalaith

I saw the summary and thought: Oh my God.



I know how you feel. Not saying that as to be any comfort. I REALLY know how you feel. I've been through the same not long ago. I think that this poem is beautiful. It shows a lot of emotion, you put in words what I couldn't, and in my opinion, that is one hell of an achievement. Congratulations with that achievement and good luck the coming period.

Lots of love, peace and paperclips,

-xxx- Elvea

Post Scriptum: *hands Fred* I wasn't done with him yet, but you need him more than I do now. Power to you(r penguin)

That was really touching.... made me think of the people I lost this year. Even though I didn't know Jennifer, I can tell that the two of you must have been close... RIP

Wow, that is so sad. Beautifully written, but sad... And I can relate to this, Andrea. My Grandmother died last thursday on the 25th. She touched everyone's lives she knew of. She was the most cheerful, generous, kind, accepting person I ever knew. When she died, I was devastated, but at least I knew she had a good long, fulfilling life. Your friend was only 14... I'm so sorry for your loss.

i liked it. i do not see why anyone would flame it.

~GeN!

*sob* That's so sad...I wish I could say I can relate to it, but I can't. The closest I've been to that was having my dog die...But it's so sad...I'm so sorry!! You must feel terrible.
RIP Jennifer.

This poem is really touching. I think Jennifer would have appreciated it.

i loved it~ it was very sweet and touching. i'm sorry for ur loss.

Andrea, that was beautiful.

all i can say andrea... this peom touch me... now i'm crying all over again

Fabulous poem, Andrea. I think Jennifer and her family would appreciate it. Talk to you soon.

I would never flame such a piece as this. It's so beautiful plus I don't believe flames help a writer at all only construtive criticism in the right way could do that. I'm sorry about your friend. * I really think sorry is so lame it doesn't say all that is meant for occasions such as these but alas I have no other word in this limited English vocabulary to use* I really enjoyed the poem altho I cried but considering the subject matter I think that is what was meant. Great job on your poem and may things get better for you. ^_^