Oh, I already gave you a piece of the Shadow-Lover poem in another review. But still, I like how good you are at making poems with rhymescheme, which I am not so good at.

God, you're dark!! I love you!! *and I mean that in a totally non-lezbo way* Keep this up!!

Licia aka Persley Snow

you suck!! **!! ** lover!!! **!!!

I have to agree with the other reviewers, sad and depressing but beautifully written. Something I can easily relate to. Awesome job

-Jessie

i agree with razorblade. its a nice poem. sad but nice:>

How sad. But I can relate. Beautifully conveyed. Good poem.