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| Frostany 2004-06-10 ch 1,  | Haunting, you should try writing a novel, i bet it would be really good, i think that there's a lot of ways this story can be developed into something longer. |
| kep 2003-07-22 ch 1,  | Deep, conveys feeling really well. I like the part about her old friends saying hi especially. Very good. |
| mELISSA 2003-03-01 ch 1, | I'M KINDA LOST BUT IT'S ALL GOOD RIGHT?! ANYWAYS IT'S GOOD FROM WHAT I CAN UNDERSTAND BUT I'M NOT REALLY "IN" IT TODAY SO -LATER |
| Angels Prayer 2002-12-04 ch 1, | Woah... that was really intense! I like. |
| Melissa 2002-11-25 ch 1, | OMG! this is really great!:) kinda sad(depressing) but really good! |
| Self Inflicted 2002-10-18 ch 1, | Hey, thanks for reviewing my story, so I'm here to return the favour, is it me or do we think the same lol. People are always asking me if I'm suicidal, but seriously, i'm not. Your grammar is a bit inconsitent, but otherwise you got talent, and good handling of the thoughts, your dialogue is good too. I can't really write good dialogue, which is why i normally use rambling of thoughts, this review is turning out longer than expected, oh well, thanks again for reviewing, go read me poems ya? |
| Tigger 2002-10-17 ch 1, | OMG lav...that was so...sad. now for the criticism...-lol- hmmm....there's nothing to say! It was really good...really morbid...but REALLY good. -applauds- |
| morbid nirvana 2002-10-16 ch 1, | i really like it |