 Laruna 2003-02-09 . chapter 1Don't you hate it when supposed "secrets" get out of control? And then when it circulates back to you, you're shocked. This was entirely amusing --- I like! The end was a bit surprising, but all in all, good. |
 who else??? 2002-10-19 . chapter 1 sometimes you scare me |
 crazedpyromanaic 2002-10-18 . chapter 1I really like this, at least the begining. It rerminss me of those parts in Utena where those creepy shdow um . . things are talking. The end? i still have no idea what i think of it. |
 ~*Amy*~ 2002-10-17 . chapter 1 Ooh...I like I like! Dude...if you wrote this sooner I could have used it for my speech project! (hehee ^^) I really like this one though...it's just...coolness. o_O |
 Cunning Coyote 2002-10-17 . chapter 1Whoa...suprise ending. I love it. Rumers are dangerous things that are almost imposssible to kill.. |