Okay, I need to describe where I'm coming from I think. Tall white guy, wears black, hates sunlight, but lives in the sunniest town in america. I don't call many things pretty. This is one of the pretty things. Sweet, short, but exactly what you mean Dragon. To balance the ego boost I've just given, I noticed three tiny things that broke the flow of your meaning for me. Azura . if there are many birds, arn't there many songs? Idunno about that tho. and the line 'they shall take my soul home it’s home.' Maybe put a period after the first home, kinda break it up a little? anyway, my thoughts and assistance.

interesting, beautiful images, but too cliche