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| MissxSoniaxMarie 2008-03-17 ch 11,  | abuseThis story is like confunjilisticly good!! I was like Woah! pahaha ...seriously its really good!! I havent read alott of finished Hades/Persephone stories but urs is pretty much the best of the ones ive read!...its crazy good...like poptarts! =] |
| atreyu love 2007-07-30 ch 11, | abuseagain.. beautiful story :D i loved it! |
| atreyu love 2007-07-30 ch 7, | abuseshe loves hades ;D beautiful story ! |
| atreyu love 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abusewhy was he saying persephone? was she going to become persephone? |
| Christina Storm 2007-07-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a very good and interesting version, and this is coming from someone who reads a lot of Hades and Persephone, but you have made a mistake. Hades couldn't have seen Aphrodite and Athena at the age Kore is right now. Aphrodite was born full grown when Uranus' ** fell into the sea after Cronus castrated him. Also, Athena was born full grown from Zeus' head after he swallowed her whole. |
| playgroundunited 2007-05-31 ch 11, | abuseawesome stuff. good re-telling of the hades-persephone story. keep it up! |
| ess3sandra 2007-04-24 ch 2, | abusewell that is a way to collect a lady, hehe. he really likes her. i bet she can warm up his cold heart, and then some... |
| ess3sandra 2007-04-24 ch 1, | abusei love mythology, it is WONDERFUL!! and add some romance, well tres bien i say! |
| Vixen of Vienna 2006-12-04 ch 1, | abuseAww. That was so good. I like how you took this old story and old stereotypes and reworked them into this beautiful synthesis. I have a new perspective on Hades now, that little romantic ... Hahaha. I only wish you could have included a consumation scene between the two, but the story is outstanding besides that. Very nice. |
| Luv and Peace 2006-10-26 ch 11, | abuseAWESOME STORY! LOVED IT! It all flowed really well and, I loved it! |
| lilylupin7 2006-10-07 ch 1, | abuseI've always loved Hades. Do you know when I read your description for Hades (his coldness and grace), I was immediately reminded of S.Snape from the Harry Potter Series? Odd isn't it...don't mind my musings... Anyway, great story :) |
| grin obsession 2006-09-22 ch 11, anon. | abuseReally well-written story, applauds!!It brought tears to my eyes, and not many stories are able to do that (: Great job |
| HotSpring90 2006-08-10 ch 2, | abuseI LOVE HADES! sorry...just had to get that out of my system...he so mysterious *gigantic hearts in eyes* ...I'm a sucker for romance >_ |
| HotSpring90 2006-08-10 ch 1, | abuseCool! I like this chapter...it kinda gives reason to why Hades took Persephone (Kore)...instead of Hades just randomly coming up with the idea...anyways I'll continue to read your other chapter and review each! |
| Susurrent Threnody 2006-07-18 ch 11, | abuseThat was beautiful. You are an extremely eloquent writer. |