This is done in a really great style. I love this idea and already I am curious to see what happens. I'd love to hear more about the land in which she lives and the life that she leads as a slave. Keep up the good work!

Actually I think this is my favorite... actually fairly realistic in a way. Cool!

wowies. took ya long to update. but i love your stories... i havent checked back to your page in a long time. well, i'm glad you're not dead. this is good.

Again, a wonderful story. Its very intersting. Update soon, k?

This is pretty good so far... You're kinda leaving us hanging here though *Wants the next chapter now*

uh-oh that's not good! oh no not the story the girl's situation! the story's great! keep up the work and update!

It's wonderful! Great writing style! Update soon!

--Luna

Oh, this is a good start of a story. You can't just leave us hanging like that. Please write more.

You JUST STARTED THIS ONE!!! Oh well...good start, but CONTINUE!

ya know what? the overseer can kiss my little italian **. :glare: anyway... awesome write, i hope you continue it, lady kickass. :)

That is really good! Please continue!
~June