If this is really about your feelings toward another you should make him notice your there. Its the only way. Trust me. I would have never gotten my boyfriend if I just walked by admiring him. But hey its your choice. I love this poem. Nice work.

very sweet and sad. ive felt the same all the time. good job

I felt that feeling last year, but now the guy I like is actually a friend... but he doesn't like me that way. Anywho, good

I share that pain. BTW i added a new Chapter to REPLICA:LOST

I so can relate to this, I can soooo relate

I must say, quite the sweetish segment. Predictable, but the rich language makes it worth chewing on.

Unrequited Love isn't and has never been argued deductivly. It's a cogent argument: "I like him but he doesn't know who I am and that makes my life so utterly miserable." Compleatly illogical but compleatly believeable at the same time. Bravo