This is excelent. I feel like this sometimes, also.

And don't worry about it not rhyming. It's still very well written, and people should be able to tell you put your thoughts and feelings into this. They're threaded into the poem along with your emotions, and the end result is a piece full of YOU. It shows who you are and what you value, as opposed to something that is just written with no heart.

Great job. *claps* Keep up the good work! Adios!

Sounds pretty cool.

Poems don't have to rhyme. It seems what this freestyle.

Hehehe...u sound rebellious...
Jus like mi... =)
Anewae, great poem u've written...
I realli can feel wif ya...
For mi, freedom is important...
de freedom to love, to choose & to do wateva i like...
i dun like pple controllin or bossin mi around...
Jus like my motto: No one can force me to do wat i dun like cos dis is my life!
Well, keep up de great work! =)

well that seems a little odd for my taste. i will ahve some of my poetry out soon. please email me if you want to hear some and get a sneak preview.
Kitti