I love this! I actually just got back from a meet, it was pretty painful but aren't they all? You did a great job with this.

I love this one-excellent rhythm all the way through.I like how it is in short bursts,like the thoughts passing through her brain.

I love how the imagery switches from real to imagined and back. Its so cool!

You have no idea who I am, do you?
(Evil snickers)
That poem like perfectly describes my first XC season (dry heaves...oh no wait that was the second season. Sorry about that!) What place were you on the team?