Very good. It's well-written and dips into female insanity, which most people don't feel comfortable writing about.

O.o creepy, but good

I like this. You seem to have a knack of writing original things. I like horror pieces, you see. Mostly because of the thrill for being frightened. And you succeeded. Keep up the good work. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo

I don't usually read horror stuff, but I sorta liked this. It's creepy, but that's what horror's for, right? It's well written, and the plot is cool. Great job.
~God bless~

I really, really liked this. And again I'm a sucker for both the R rated and horror pieces.

I liked the lines between the verses, the ones that appear to be the narrator's thoughts. They added a lot to the creepiness of the poem.

The colours were used in the most inspirational way once more. And I didn't find this scary. I found it beautiful. And again, I'm not the sanest person in FPcom...

@_@... *blinks* I, er... I... I... I want my blankie...

@_@ My eyes... they're stuck like this... @_@ Can't... blink... too... frickin... freaked... out... gonna go watch something a bit tamer... like the Exorcist or somethin... put me right to sleep... NO! No sleep... psycho lady... stalking mind...

It's so good, but... @_@ I... I... *clicks fav. story button*

It left me breathless. Do write more, plaese!

That was. stunning. Quite breathtaking. I was especially impressed by the parentheses between the verses, that was very effective. The sheer. well, the sheer lunacy(!) of the woman was compelling. Horror suits you. take it as a compliment.

Ohh, creepy! Very well written, and all the imagery really created the scene. I like the different views of the situation the contrast between what has happened and what she thinks about it. I read this awhile back and decided to review it when I thought about it again. Very good! Thanks for your reviews on my stuff, too!

ohhh.....*shivers* creeppyy.....

This is fantastic. Very different from what you usually write, but good none the less. Keep it up.
And also HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Enjoy, God bless and work hard for good grades( Yuck! Sorry...but that's what moms say anyway.)

how do you get so many reviews for your poems?
wait, that's a dumb question...
this poem is really good.

wow...great poem! really scary to think about. i really like it! good job! keep writing!

You should do more "horror" type based poetry too. Your writing is just wonderful it seems, regradless of what you're writing about.

Wow... frightening and engaging... like some scene out of Stephan King. Really well developed. Sent shivers down my spine! Truly horrifying!

Thanks so much for your continued reviews! I feel like you might be the only person I write that story for but just for you I will see it through, lol!

Take Care and Keep writing!
Jade