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Jonny Boy 2003-04-28 . chapter 1
GOOD POEM
^_^
Voodoo Fyrefly 2003-01-21 . chapter 1
OK, as a cutter myself (and sadly not cured) can really, really see myself in the place of the narrator. It seems so real. The emotions and thoughts are exactly ones that have crossed my head at some time or other, even down to feeling the sting when clothes brush across a wound. Frighteningly accurate.

~TIO
wormmonsoul 2002-10-30 . chapter 1
*rubs her wrists and twitches* And you say that comes to you at night??? OMG. Those thoughts are very tricky. *hugs the author* But me is here. I'm the one supposed to be a funny one. (how many of my reviews started with 'LOL'!!!) And now I'm SAD!!!!!! And I'm afraid of blood...
Centrau guardian 2002-10-28 . chapter 1
So very dark, but perfectly written, this poem emits such powerful feelings... And so very realistic too! You are a truely incredible writer.
NeverAgainTruth 2002-10-28 . chapter 1
ooo, scary
tellmemore 2002-10-27 . chapter 1
too true, but if u've just started, STOP!! IT IS ADDICTING!!! peace
Shounen-ai Princess 2002-10-25 . chapter 1
I understand these feelings...hell, I'm supposed to, having tried to commit suicide a few times myself.
caffienejunkie 2002-10-18 . chapter 1
wow. I really like this poem alot. It really really conveys the thoughts of a cutter (at least mine in my experience) I like the numbness.
Hopes Forgotten 2002-10-18 . chapter 1
Wow, that's good. I'd take the time to write a longer review cause I really like this but my blood is clotting so I got to go.
Wrong Name Tag 2002-10-18 . chapter 1
Very angsty, and very descriptive. You can see and feel pretty much everything being said... good job

-Jessie
sinner babe 2002-10-18 . chapter 1
thats......depressing.
GREAT POEM
we should get together for a chat about stuff like poetry and fanfiction.
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