Hello there, i just read your story and i must say that it is great!!!!!!
very sadddd, almost made me cry.... o liked the ending very much.....and the way Lucas is toward his sister, just sooo sweet and protective....
you are very good at writting angsty stories... i noticed that you are a fan of Harry Potter... and i was wondering if you could go check out my fics....theyre not good or anything, quite bad if you ask me...but nevertheless, i would like your opinion...you dont have to go if you dont want to...but still....
anyway, again this is a really great story, and good luck.

Kim, I'm glad you put this on ur site. It's a good story, and it really gives people something to think about.

OMG .... O.O; Okay, that scares me. ~.~; It was well-written, but kinda ... *has no word for it*. Your teacher let you turn that in for English class? Woah O.O; This story will haunt me for the rest of my life (or at least until I'm an adult and forget everything).
~TBH (unincorporated)

this was so sad, but really good