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Reviews For: unthinkable

Mandie1
2003-02-18
ch 1,
I liked it. It was really orignal! :) I was lost with the 'drip drip' things till I got to the end.. then it made sense. i thought it was something else.. but i loved it keep it up
Jade
2002-10-25
ch 1,
Heya!

This poem was really black and depressing but expressive and powerful at the same time it was wonderful!

I took down my poems because I am trying to get them published and I cannot have them posted online and get them put in a book at the same time but I do plan on updating from time to time. If you want to see some more of my work let me know and I will email it to you (I don't like those people who have really supported me to feel abandoned so just to let you know I do email poems out sometimes when I write them and I can add you to my list). Anyway, take care and let me know when you uodate so I can review again!

Jade
nobodyzfool
2002-10-18
ch 1,
Very dark and good
Things I write are okay too *wink, wink, nudge, nudge* that means 2 go read them!
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