OK, I am not reading these in order, but this time I swear I am going to give you a proper review and give you some constructive criticism.

Must - find - something - wrong!

I can't! I could (affecting nasal professor voice) *complain about the lack of proper structure* but forget that!

So, again I have to leave a complimentary review. Of course, luckily enough you are good enough to be able to improve your own work (refers to "Dark") without help.

I know! I'll point out all the typos!
Mwa-ha-ha-ha-ha!
(searches in vain for typos)
"Blast!" -- of course that is Stewie from "Family Guy". Wow, I miss that show.

I like it, tikimoof. This is almost like your other poems except you have have mastered the technique of rhyming after double lines. But overall, I think this is your best poem that you've written yet.


N.J.N.


"When life gives you lemons, READ EM'"- Me (Naomi)

[cheers wildy]

It's official, I am now your review slave for all things poetic. I would have read the other two - but I don't really play Smash Bros. all that much, and to be honest, I have no clue what Slayers is. [Looks ashamed]

Oh, and the Sheik story [drools all over Sheik] should get chapter three soon - and I'll probably be off starting another Zelda saga soon, yay ^.^ I'm obsessed with it now...

~Care of-Soda~

very deep me like

I'm not quite sure what this poem was about, but the language you used is just wonderful.