I like this...it's nice. My favoite it is "He knows he's manipulative/accepts he's insane" I relate to that. It's a really solid line that works well. The ending is great too..."can he hate his poison and love it too?"

This is all in all a great piece, regardless of waht you think. If it IS depressed drivel, it's GOOD depressed drivel. Keep it up. We should all be so talented.